PhreeNapdizzle vs BIG BOSS
 

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4-10 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
And all that other shit...



Minimum posts to vote: 40

Check in by: 08-14-05 at 03:12 AM

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BIG BOSS has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-05 03:13 AM.

PhreeNapdizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-05 03:15 AM.

You as whack as shit gets..
im surpised you put ur raps up in battles for bets
thats the wrong path dogg, you cant suc-ceed
your the pathetic type that screams, "Can! I! Get! Fucked! Please!"
think ya mean? Here son i'll give you some feed..
everything you wrote sucks, is that hard to believe?
you the type that fights for delight,
but cant-handle the-light of-a-candle..
unmighty dike with sandals, who planss.. superior scandals
but cant come through, you a fool, and RV knows its true
spit bull-shit? that you do.. too bad thats all you pull
so your the boss?... who is that your bossin, huh?
quit all this barking, get out some rhymes and start tossin em.
thanks for versing, commercing, and trans-vercing
i hope u been rehercing this verse thing cuz its sure-to-be-hurting..

You dont want it wit me, so nigga just swallow tha beef..// My gun is like ya floss tha way it stays deep in ya teeth..// Call me tha "Sand Man" the way i'll put this nigga to sleep..// Have him hidin' like he just seen a "White Man in a Sheet"..//

Yeah nigga i raise Hell; Cuz i was "Raised in Hell"..// Throwin ya shoes over tha power lines is tha only time you be tossin ya "SHELLS"..// I aint a movie store; but you can call my "AK" ya "Block Buster"..// Cuz i'll crack ya block and have ya streets bleedin, nigga thats how i "Knock Hustles..//

Nigga you talk greasy in private; cuz like a old man with viagra nigga you only hard wit help..// matter of fact you feelin too much of ya self..// Nigga your not that nice..//
I drop more "Good Bars", than tha suburbs on holloween night..//(<
I keep my flow smooth like faucets..// I'll bring more "Heat" to ya hood than obese "Dykes" fuckin in a 5 foot closet..// I'll take ya life fast & smooth like a mid-night creep..// Nigga suckin satans dick is tha only time you can "Spit out Heat"..//

Fuck a "Nap" im makin this nigga prepare for his "Eternal Sleep"..// Get him a "Pillow-top" matress in his casket so he can "Rest-In-Peace"..// So you can meet up wit "Rick James" and you'll be his "Super Freak"..// Nap's nothin, i'll rape him on tha mic and have him questionin his "Sexual Preference" like Tweet...

COME ON BRO, LETS GO!!!STRAIGHT FREESTYLE OFF THA TOP OF THA HEAD...YA'LL VOTE UP...

HEY, COME ON YA'LL LETS GET THA VOTES POPPIN... :thumbup:

good verse.. good luck with the votes n all..
you were raised in hell? thats crazy

Lmaooo!!!just A Line Bro...it's All About Tha "g-o-d!!!it Was Meant In A Different Way You Know...like "i Was Raised Really Tough And Hard, Thats All" Not Really Raised In Hell...lol...good Verse Too...and It Look Like Aint Nobody Gonna Vote So...good Battle For Real Man...

Voted For: PhreeNapdizzle

You dont want it wit me, so nigga just swallow tha beef..//
My gun is like ya floss tha way it stays deep in ya teeth..//
Call me tha "Sand Man" the way i'll put this nigga to sleep..//
Have him hidin' like he just seen a "White Man in a Sheet"..//
^Great word play, decent flow, but a lot of self glor... good opener

Yeah nigga i raise Hell; Cuz i was "Raised in Hell"..//
Throwin ya shoes over tha power lines is tha only time you be tossin ya "SHELLS"..//
I aint a movie store; but you can call my "AK" ya "Block Buster"..//
Cuz i'll crack ya block and have ya streets bleedin, nigga thats how i "Knock Hustles..//

Nigga you talk greasy in private; cuz like a old man with viagra nigga you only hard wit help..//
matter of fact you feelin too much of ya self..// Nigga your not that nice..//
I drop more "Good Bars", than tha suburbs on holloween night..//(<
I keep my flow smooth like faucets..//
I'll bring more "Heat" to ya hood than obese "Dykes" fuckin in a 5 foot closet..//
I'll take ya life fast & smooth like a mid-night creep..//
Nigga suckin satans dick is tha only time you can "Spit out Heat"..//
^imagery and similes are ok, but seem forced and dull, mixed with self-glor
multis attempted are also forced

Fuck a "Nap" im makin this nigga prepare for his "Eternal Sleep"..//
^Only good personal in the whole thing
Get him a "Pillow-top" matress in his casket so he can "Rest-In-Peace"..//
So you can meet up wit "Rick James" and you'll be his "Super Freak"..//
Nap's nothin, i'll rape him on tha mic and have him questionin his "Sexual Preference" like Tweet...
^Closing would have been great if it ended @ Rest in peace, because
it is connected with the theme of the opener, but the extra 2 lines are
forced and go off on a tangent, for an attempted cheap personal,
and are ineffective. Overall flow was ok.

Nap:
You as whack as shit gets..
im surpised you put ur raps up in battles for bets
^weak, and unsupported punch
thats the wrong path dogg, you cant suc-ceed
your the pathetic type that screams, "Can! I! Get! Fucked! Please!"
^Great multis, damn
think ya mean? Here son i'll give you some feed..
everything you wrote sucks, is that hard to believe?
you the type that fights for delight,
but cant-handle the-light of-a-candle..
unmighty dike with sandals, who planss.. superior scandals
but cant come through, you a fool, and RV knows its true
spit bull-shit? that you do.. too bad thats all you pull
so your the boss?... who is that your bossin, huh?
^good personal
quit all this barking, get out some rhymes and start tossin em.
thanks for versing, commercing, and trans-vercing
i hope u been rehercing this verse thing cuz its sure-to-be-hurting..
^Good closer, short and sweet.

Similes: BB
Flow: Nap
Personals: tied (both very weak)
Intro: tied
closer: Nap
Creativity with similes and wordplay: BB
Multis: Nap

Nap gets my vote in a close battle

Voted For: BIG BOSS

BigBoss's Break down...coo..battle,str8 up!


You dont want it wit me, so nigga just swallow tha beef..// My gun is like ya floss tha way it stays deep in ya teeth..// Call me tha "Sand Man" the way i'll put this nigga to sleep..// Have him hidin' like he just seen a "White Man in a Sheet"..//
Sorta ah weak opener...cuz tha punch has been thrown so much,Tha 2nd line was weak also,but had a punch 3/10

Yeah nigga i raise Hell; Cuz i was "Raised in Hell"..// Throwin ya shoes over tha power lines is tha only time you be tossin ya "SHELLS"..// I aint a movie store; but you can call my "AK" ya "Block Buster"..// Cuz i'll crack ya block and have ya streets bleedin, nigga thats how i "Knock Hustles..//
1st line was nice,but no multi's(can complain.)..effective tho'
2nd line was stretched an that "BlockBuster" line is played....6/10

Nigga you talk greasy in private; cuz like a old man with viagra nigga you only hard wit help..// matter of fact you feelin too much of ya self..// Nigga your not that nice..//
I drop more "Good Bars", than tha suburbs on holloween night..//(<
I keep my flow smooth like faucets..// I'll bring more "Heat" to ya hood than obese "Dykes" fuckin in a 5 foot closet..// I'll take ya life fast & smooth like a mid-night creep..// Nigga suckin satans dick is tha only time you can "Spit out Heat"..//
1st line was coo...a lil over stretched..tha end of tha punch shouldve been tha begining.
2nd line was ur best thus far...I like tha play on words,structure was off tho'.
3rd line was self glory..not needed but it fit..Me personaly I like that line..
4th line was same"Self Glory"..but tha punch at tha end was played as Fuck!
over all 7/10

Fuck a "Nap" im makin this nigga prepare for his "Eternal Sleep"..// Get him a "Pillow-top" matress in his casket so he can "Rest-In-Peace"..// So you can meet up wit "Rick James" and you'll be his "Super Freak"..// Nap's nothin, i'll rape him on tha mic and have him questionin his "Sexual Preference" like Tweet...
1st line was nice play on his name,A personal at that..not really any word play tho'.
2nd line was almost a good punch but failed on tha play of words..but still was st8...Seems like a throwback 2 me.But for an ending closer knock out punch it wasnt!
5/10 at best..

Now Naps Braekdown...*whew*

You as whack as shit gets..
im surpised you put ur raps up in battles for bets
sorta fucked up if you ask me...weak opener an for tha 1st time a line thats in need of stretching...weak Really! 1/10

thats the wrong path dogg, you cant suc-ceed
your the pathetic type that screams, "Can! I! Get! Fucked! Please!"
Even worse..."Damn!",No type of punch...couldve kept that in tha diss cypher or sum shit like it...Why?did you even separate Tha Succeed part..didnt make sense. 0/10

think ya mean? Here son i'll give you some feed..
everything you wrote sucks, is that hard to believe?
A lil personal,but failed ta deliever a real punch...but better than tha last 2 bars..
3/10

you the type that fights for delight,
but cant-handle the-light of-a-candle..
unmighty dike with sandals, who planss.. superior scandals
Fell right off again...WTF!?!,Do you wanna lose?....Multi's where there but didnt make sense at all...WHACK!2/10 for tha multi's

but cant come through, you a fool, and RV knows its true
spit bull-shit? that you do.. too bad thats all you pull
Okay..Why did I even bother breaking down ur verse....*Sleepy*..Oh my bad,back ta ur bar.....Whack 2/10

so your the boss?... who is that your bossin, huh?
quit all this barking, get out some rhymes and start tossin em.
thanks for versing, commercing, and trans-vercing
i hope u been rehercing this verse thing cuz its sure-to-be-hurting..
A lil better...But I dont even have ta tell you this.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....YOu Lost!

No hate but elevate...

My vote goes to BIGBOSS,St8 Up an Down!