Peace Back vs bam!
 

Battle Rules:

10-14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

haha

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-15-05 at 12:16 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

BaM! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-05 11:23 PM.

I’ll stab you in the front, ‘cause your back is provoked
Peace is dope…
This just shows; even his explanations are jokes!
You need a scope for your verse, to better see the punches/votes you score
This faggot wouldn’t have me in “Stitches” if he pushed me into the store!
You must be four, ‘cause your disses are just immature bullshit.
If your verse is better than THIS , than you obviously stole it!
Your gayness is like your mouth; you can’t control a muzzle (muscle)

To reply to that, Id laugh, “HA” yeah, I’ll “chuck – L”
Only thing I’m battlin’ off is my pants, yeah FUCK SLACK
Steal the peace from your name and leave you… BARE, back!

…Fagit.

Peace Back has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-05 12:09 AM.

It would be better if you weren't even born, for God's sake
My parents planned to have me but you're a drunken mistake
Your two dads hooked up in the back of a crack-place
Takin turns man-juic-in on each others face
I know they taught you all you know about fuckin a man
Cuz the only place your known for takin it's "in the can"
Your favorite part of prisonlife was getting raped in the slammer
That's how you earned your nickname of Bam-the-fag-hammer
And the chocolate-tossed-salads were your favorite food
Takin turns putting ya face in the assess of dudes
Stealin ya name from the catchphrase of Emeral Lagasi
Yer-only wins are cheap crew votes from the girls in your posse
Now yer burnt cuz my popularity's spreading like fire
And the only thing left for you to do is retire

This was feedback posted for Peace Back
 

yo the flow wasnt great but i would have to go with Peace Back on the flow...i think the vote would have to go to peace back because everything rymed and it was easier to follow...holla back at shyea boy

Voted For: BaM!

you had a sorta played structure but his punches were not existant.

Marked.

Yo Daubs, that is the lamest feedback I've ever seen. Bam, if you have any respect for yourself, drop that vote. There was no explanation.

there's no explanation needed, if we remove all the votes, it will take 3 years to get this closed

It was meant to be feed, dq it if ya want...its strate.

Voted For: Peace Back

i vote for peace back becuz his punches structure everything is better........tko peace back

goddamn fucking newbies. up............................

why?
 

Why bro? what makes you any different from them? your record is 0 and 0. Why don't you quit cryin b/c someone voted against you

listen "bro", im a fucking alias. if i was to battle you under my real name i would set a min. # of posts to vote, and you wouldnt get jack shit from these newbie retards who think that perfect flow is what wins a battle... im done argueing over this pathetic bullshit, you suck. 1.

Voted For: Peace Back

Vote for Peace back..

Peace.. i liked your structure.. u made the flow easily followable and to me thats a huge part of a battle decision.. your punches were decent.. i wont brag on them.. mostly, your rhymes were basic words.. nothing big on the vocab..

BaM.. u showed that you did your homework which is good.. the 2nd quote u added tho dint match the structure of ur verse.. i don want to stop reading a verse.. to read a quote.. and go back to the verse.. u gotta make the transition of the two collide..
You had decent punches.. probly the same as Peace Backs.. not a bad verse.. im not sweating it either

Overall Vote is to peace back.. in his punches, he directed them as much as posible to baM.. they attacked him and him only.. Bam.. u attempted that with the quotes.. but u didnt attack him with that.. u just found a quote and made a line to rhyme with it.. thats creative but its not a personal punch.. Peace also had a couple more multis and that kicked it up a knotch..
v/peaceback