Dopium vs John Cena
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes

And Cena NONE of that WACK ass shit that cena has spit. :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 08-17-05 at 09:24 PM

Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed for not dropping 10 lines

Dopium has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-05 09:26 PM.

John Cena has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-05 09:29 PM.

He claims he's god's son, man, now ain't that shit absurb?
Well, I guess then I be God, the way I'm "sonnin" this lil' herb
Just by lookin' @ your name, you're below me, you're straight wack
You ain't even on the level below me, or the one that's after that
This kid is prolly poor, he ain't even kin, yo
Lookin' out your bedroom, only time you ever win-dough
This kid is a pussy, he gon try and escape this sonnin'
It's like I got a cold...... the way I nose you runnin'

How you gonna rep a bitch in ya sig who cant even rap
Seriously dog your wack and to tell u honest ur D/R a fag
kid made 1 video and that was the gayest shit ive seen
"You cant see me" wtf is this a wrestler tryin to be a MC
do garentee to burn me like wax from candle wics
Kid gots jokes seriously homie you've lost it
all im sayin is his rhymes arnt even halfway decent
should just bassically prohibit your own shit
I allready owned this ho a perfect demonstration
parts of ur lifes goin up kid and it aint inflation


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LOL OMG cena I said 10 lines Can u read? Oblious not u have 8 lines Fuckin idiot. And We uppin for votes ppl ight.;)

Voted For: Dopium

He claims he's god's son, man, now ain't that shit absurb?
Well, I guess then I be God, the way I'm "sonnin" this lil' herb
^^hmm...OK I guess...6/10
Just by lookin' @ your name, you're below me, you're straight wack
You ain't even on the level below me, or the one that's after that
^^not much of a punch....1/10
This kid is prolly poor, he ain't even kin, yo
Lookin' out your bedroom, only time you ever win-dough
^^PLAYED AS FUCK!!....a forced rhyme too...1/10
This kid is a pussy, he gon try and escape this sonnin'
It's like I got a cold...... the way I nose you runnin'
^^set-up gay as you already said some sonnin shit..and knows/nose lines are played as fuck...2/10

OK..flow was ite.Thought had a forced rhyme in there..which made it sound sloppy.Had a whole bar that self glorified and wasn't a punch.And too many played lines.You had no personals..and ya didn't do 10 lines.

How you gonna rep a bitch in ya sig who cant even rap
Seriously dog your wack and to tell u honest ur D/R a fag
^^basic.....4/10
kid made 1 video and that was the gayest shit ive seen
"You cant see me" wtf is this a wrestler tryin to be a MC
^^well...1st personal so far in this battle....5/10
do garentee to burn me like wax from candle wics
Kid gots jokes seriously homie you've lost it
^^weak....2/10
all im sayin is his rhymes arnt even halfway decent
should just bassically prohibit your own shit
^^didn't rhyme n punch sucked...2/10
I allready owned this ho a perfect demonstration
parts of ur lifes goin up kid and it aint inflation
^^Good....6/10

Ok...I though this was a bit one-sided.Had a line that didn't rhyme...but aside from it..flow was ite.Structure was good.Didn't see any played lines..but there was some basic lines.Like that 1st bar...which was u just stating shit.I'll give u it for havin a personal and that last bar.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204095

lol ight homie that was just a quick frestyle but ight i got ya and we uppin for votes ight ppl.;)

can we return favors here!?!?!?!?!?!?................ :uptight:

^lmao. @ your vote................ but upping this shit. chain gang

Voted For: John Cena

Dopium:

Alot of elevation is needed before going against someone like this. I didnt see any real punches, nothing creative, no personals, no nuthin...Just 10 lines of bullshit. Try being more creative and using punches and personals, cuz thats what really counts in a battle.

John Cena:

Nice verse here. You didnt waste any time with fillers or bullshit, just got straight to the point of dissing your opponent. Punches were straight, nothing played, but a few lines were a little too basic then I like to see. You were consistent, and you had personals. You owned him bitch :)

V/ JC

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Ight lets get votes goin again ppl ight and barz that is a hate vote.;)

^^ You cant be fucking serious...

Fuckin bitch cant take a loss...

Set up a battle if you need to talk more shit :)

Voted For: John Cena

I allready owned this ho a perfect demonstration
parts of ur lifes goin up kid and it aint inflation
^^
closes bar u had to a witty punch, u shoulda said sumin like ya ... ya level could be inflation and still not go up.
vs.
jon.
ya whole verse had potential but every line was played to shit, but i gotta give it to you cuz everyline had wordplay and a punch.
This kid is a pussy, he gon try and escape this sonnin'
It's like I got a cold...... the way I nose you runnin'
^^
this was funny, very played saying but u put a decent flip on it... decent verse just think of less played punches next time cuz sonnin things is played level lines are really played.
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return wit an honest vote please... link in my sig!!!