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Drama Queen vrs. Lyriclesolja
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday
No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. All Battlers must vote on 1 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles. If vote threads aren't in your poetry battle thread by sunday you will suffer a loss by Disqualification. I will enforce this rule. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Daemon, Drama Queen, E.C.). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extention, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be Disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absense. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous. Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues! Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count! This is a number-one contender battle. If Drama Queen wins this week, she can face Lyriclesolja next week for the title. Combatants: Drama Queen and Heavyweight Champ. Lyriclesolja Topic: Eye of the Beholder |
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Ahh a rematch.......hello there DQ!......this aught to be fun......CHECK
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Extension granted until Saturday.
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Eye Of The Beholder Candles faintly flickering across the room Red roses in bloom releasing their scent As time went by beauty I could not deny Luscious lips tremble over his dark skin As million butterflies are fluttering within Slowly sending shivers down my spine By kindly kissing along my facial line Such sensual shadows become one Yet we have ended before we begun Ferociously taken away from me Locked up before we were free Made by matters of the heart But treacherously torn apart Destroyed before we create Between all love and hate As shadow and light Yet he’s able to excite Depths of my sexual soul Who loves me as a whole But they do not understand Why I’d take him as my man How their stomachs are turned When they see how he’s burned But I truly adore every single scar I follow him as my one guiding star On rough days we never marooned So sensually kissing his every wound Carefully cater to him as he’s my king Marrying a man but no monster or thing Resting my head on his strong shoulder Beauty is seen in the eye of the beholder |
A Woman
. . . She lives in mind castles, Where theres no worries or boobie tassles, Her hair is of a long light brown, But shes big atleast 200 pounds, Some men dont show her respect, With a life full of neglect and no sex, Many men have passed her love, Gave it away and there grave she Dug, Heart of gold eyes of diamonds, Never told she couldent succeed, Never been big on drink and weed, Only does what she needs, Love in her mind is alwase there, From a guy with long hair, To the Husky with a stare, Her life has been long 23 years, On the wake up cryed many tears, Since the stick up getting out is a fear, Capital Fraud was waht she was taught, Did multiple Jobs before she got caught, But she keeps things straight with herself, Wants to go to college better chance for wealth, Her life like an open casket dead but ready to live, Ready to strive in this life that god has givin, 23 on the wake up and she still loves livin, So finially shes got 2 months till paroll, When the love for herself starts to take its toll, She loves herself more than ever before-feelings flow, And Yo 25 to life mixed with love for yourself slow-no tellin how far you can Go, This Woman. |
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Nice Poetry by both of you i thought dramas was deep and liked the emotion it dont rhyme all the time but thats not the idea of poetry i dont think...lol erm i think you started betta at the beggining and went off a bit at the end the beggining ...
Candles faintly flickering across the room Red roses in bloom releasing their scent As time went by beauty I could not deny Luscious lips tremble over his dark skin As million butterflies are fluttering within Slowly sending shivers down my spine By kindly kissing along my facial line Such sensual shadows become one Yet we have ended before we begun Ferociously taken away from me Locked up before we were free Made by matters of the heart But treacherously torn apart ....seemed to be deeper than the end very good emotion in here overall 25/30 Lyricle Soljah Yours seemed to be more ghettoey rofl ...good emotion good imagery made me think but i think you need to work on making the content stronger than it is but good verse liked this part the best Heart of gold eyes of diamonds, Never told she couldent succeed, Never been big on drink and weed, Only does what she needs, Love in her mind is alwase there, From a guy with long hair, To the Husky with a stare, Her life has been long 23 years, On the wake up cryed many tears, Since the stick up getting out is a fear, Capital Fraud was waht she was taught, Did multiple Jobs before she got caught, dont ask me why i jus liked it seemed to be the strongest part to me good emotion overall 23/30 close battle but i would say this goes to drama queen |
-.- drama queen... ... LINK, HOE. i'll be lenient since there were hardly any battles. But next time, I'll DQ you for fucking sure. :\ Drama Queens wins 1-0... |
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