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Magic5 08-15-05 08:46 PM

Apostrophe vs. Dizzee Rascal
 
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Cocaine 08-16-05 01:51 AM

check check check

Dizzee Rascal 08-16-05 07:14 AM

Czzzzzzzzzeckkk

Dizzee Rascal 08-16-05 02:44 PM

Ok his name is Apostrophe hence the Ap wordplay

Bitch has to borrow pride, since he hasn't got any swallow
Swing an axe like spacecraft abandonments 'leaving Ap-hollow' /Apollo

Dizzee Rascal 08-16-05 02:45 PM

*to swallow..... (spelling error)

Cocaine 08-19-05 01:49 AM

Dizzee's poor..searchin the uk streets for food.. and it's really a shame boy..
and this Rascal's just happy for a meal... even without the fucking lame toy..

Spektikul 08-19-05 02:38 AM

Dizzee -

Line 1: Didnt hit at all and wasnt used as a line to build up the 2nd one. Basically a pointless waste fa real.

Line 2: Just because you used the first 2 letters of his name, it doesnt make this line nameplay. I felt it was weak. If you were going to go this way at all you could have worded it a lot better.

Apostrophe -

Line 1: First line was pretty much weak. BUT, it did in fact build up your second one. You also used a little nameplay in both lines which I liked a lot better than just the first 2 letters of his name.

Line 2: Pretty funny shit, made me laugh. Didnt think you were going to go that way with the punch. At first I was kinda like blah, but after re-reading it I was like dope/funny shit son.

V/APOSTROPHE.........................

M&rk 08-19-05 03:08 AM

vote/ ap... top ten nomination easily

Dizzee Rascal 08-19-05 05:58 AM

Dr....just spelling my name........................

PrahJect 08-19-05 08:46 AM

vote dizee rascal/

dizzee came strong in both lines......funny wordplay...decent punch....7/10

yo apostrophe...youre first line wasnt good, but ure second was rlly funny i liked that bt jus came short IMO 6/10

New Edition 08-19-05 09:58 AM

Vote:apos

even if i liked dizz punch.............
i re-read apos and find out he comes harder......

DaTrusHurtz 08-19-05 10:51 AM

Dizzee's was wayyyy forced.. Apostrophe, that was pretty decent man, nice job.

Vote - Apos

Thassarap 08-19-05 11:33 AM

v/apostrophe...

noname 08-19-05 12:28 PM

v/apostrophe

Dizzie had nicer concept..but I thought he used it bad.

Germ 08-19-05 01:12 PM

ehhnh....i really don't like this battle, cause both could have been better...

v/apostrophe...cause dizzee's was too general.


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