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Drakel vs C_R_E_A_M
Battle Rules:
8-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No D/R Minimum posts to vote: 60 Check in by: 08-16-05 at 02:05 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
C_R_E_A_M has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-05 01:41 PM.
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Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-05 01:45 PM.
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Look man,i guess imma have ta hurt-dis-cat...
he Sweet,claimen he nice wit his hershey-raps... u gonna merk-me-scrap? thats a big step-u-taken... cuz u couldnt Exhale Heat even after the Breathes-u-taken... pls...i rip cats like u,without even Thinken-Of-Scripts... beef? i'll put Damu'z(bloods) on ya head like u was Creepin-wit-Crips.... and i know Drakel aint Keepin-Da-Clips,he to scared ta Beef-Wit-My-Click.... so i'll stuff da Mic In Ya Mouth so u can't Speak-Wit-Ya-Lips... U Punk Son-Of-A-Bitch!!!! **don't take it personal its just hip-hop |
who the hell are you? seems nothing but a bitch, ya?
cause when i say you're whack as fuck, no, i aint playin witcha sure i guess you're not that bad, if you dont mind gas leaks cause you'll never 'C' win.........like blind athletes this shit is always losing, man, he never stops and this bitch thinks he's hard...nah, cream is soft i know you're a total wreck, but you think you can mess with this? im plungin ya into a deep sleep....just so you can rest in piss put some lotion on my hands, nah fag, this isn't your dreams just to make it official, my punches leavin you creamed ________________________________________ 1. user title 2. easy 3. think of real cream :shoot: 4. plunge into a deep sleep = kill, lmlo......from his sig 5. should be easy for all you n00bs who don't like to get things :shoot: gl |
Voted For: Drakel
CREAM: Punches: Blah they were decent at best. Nothing really hit very hard man. Multies do not make a good battle, punches and personals do. Personals: Didnt see any personals either. Try being creative, throwing in a few plays on his name or something... Wordplay: Hershey's line was played as fuck...Elevate. Flow: The only thing you did right, but there was one stretched bar. Drakel: Punches: Real good. Made me laugh, creative, consistent, and strong. Nice job here. Personals: Good plays off his name, although some were a little simple. I feel you could've came up with something better, but you still had personals, and he didnt. Wordplay: Good, good. Nothing played, which is always a plus. Flow: Nothing wrong here. V/ Drakel |
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This was feedback posted for C_R_E_A_M
HoLo
Look man,i guess imma have ta hurt-dis-cat... he Sweet,claimen he nice wit his hershey-raps... 4/5-Nice opener coulda came harder u gonna merk-me-scrap? thats a big step-u-taken... cuz u couldnt Exhale Heat even after the Breathes-u-taken... 4/5-I liked the 2nd line it was pretty nice pls...i rip cats like u,without even Thinken-Of-Scripts... beef? i'll put Damu'z(bloods) on ya head like u was Creepin-wit-Crips.... 5/5-Best line ya had and i know Drakel aint Keepin-Da-Clips,he to scared ta Beef-Wit-My-Click.... so i'll stuff da Mic In Ya Mouth so u can't Speak-Wit-Ya-Lips... 4/5-Nice closer Overall:17/20 Feedback:Multis throughout the whole verse, a good drop your structure was off a little bit but it didnt really effect the flow of ya shit nice drop man Drakel who the hell are you? seems nothing but a bitch, ya? cause when i say you're whack as fuck, no, i aint playin witcha 3/5-Coulda came harder with that opened but not to bad sure i guess you're not that bad, if you dont mind gas leaks cause you'll never 'C' win.........like blind athletes 4/5-your best verse, you coulda came harder but not to bad this shit is always losing, man, he never stops and this bitch thinks he's hard...nah, cream is soft 3/5-coulda came harder..all i can say i know you're a total wreck, but you think you can mess with this? im plungin ya into a deep sleep....just so you can rest in piss 2/5-didnt really get that.....rest in piss? seems like you forced that rhyme put some lotion on my hands, nah fag, this isn't your dreams just to make it official, my punches leavin you creamed 4/5-A decent closer wanna your better lines Overall:16/25 Feedback:kinda weak, wasn't really a bad drop but you need to elevate bub Vote: HoLo/C_R_E_A_M Reason:Came a lot harder...had multis, a better rhyme structure, better punches |
Voted For: Drakel
LoL@ this battle who the hell are you? seems nothing but a bitch, ya? cause when i say you're whack as fuck, no, i aint playin witcha ^^Lmao..good play off user title...8/10 sure i guess you're not that bad, if you dont mind gas leaks cause you'll never 'C' win.........like blind athletes ^^hmm...Ok....6/10 this shit is always losing, man, he never stops and this bitch thinks he's hard...nah, cream is soft ^^uncreative bar right here....4/10 i know you're a total wreck, but you think you can mess with this? im plungin ya into a deep sleep....just so you can rest in piss ^^ok play of sig....5/10 put some lotion on my hands, nah fag, this isn't your dreams just to make it official, my punches leavin you creamed ^^OK....6/10 Ok...had some decent punches.Best one was the 1st bar..the play of the user title.The punch that didn't hit was the 2nd bar.Just seemed to uncreative.When you look at his name..that's like the 1st thing you think off.But overrall..ite verse. Look man,i guess imma have ta hurt-dis-cat... he Sweet,claimen he nice wit his hershey-raps... ^^MY goodness.this was the most forced multi I ever seen...2/10 u gonna merk-me-scrap? thats a big step-u-taken... cuz u couldnt Exhale Heat even after the Breathes-u-taken... ^^why did you have hypens in the make me scrap part?..2/10 pls...i rip cats like u,without even Thinken-Of-Scripts... beef? i'll put Damu'z(bloods) on ya head like u was Creepin-wit-Crips.... ^^weak as fuck...3/10 and i know Drakel aint Keepin-Da-Clips,he to scared ta Beef-Wit-My-Click.... so i'll stuff da Mic In Ya Mouth so u can't Speak-Wit-Ya-Lips... ^^are you even with a crew?..and played punch..3/10 OK...My first advice..leave multis alone.It ain't workin for you.They were as forced as it can get.And stop with the hypens.U don't need it.As for your structure..fix it so that it's normal. Vote-Drakel RTF BELOW http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204478 |
meh, wrote it in 10 min......you try being ridiculously creative :thumbup:
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Voted For: Drakel
eh this battle was kinda disappointing.. CREAM - your verse was kinda weak..you didnt really have any punches or personals from what i read..the only personal i saw was that last line..where you said dont take it personal..thats the closest thing to a personal i saw..as for punches there were none..your closer was your best and that was still weak..ima give u a 6/10 Drakel - not sure if you took this battle seriously or not..definitely a weak verse..not as weak as his because you had a few personals and attempted some punches..so based on that i would give u a 7 Drakel wins. |
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