"Treat You Like a Son" (VERY EMOTIONAL TRACK)
 

Pop got shot, mama left you all alone,
U my nephew but ill treat u like a son tho,
U may not think so but mom always loved u,
Went through hours of labour jus to see you,
Things fucked up in her life money couldnt solve,
Life seem to losin purpose as her body turned cold,
This is for you, so you knw when ure older ull understand
That Im here for you and that ure uncle aint yo dad,
But ill treat you like a son, cos I love u more than life,
I hate them mufuckas who say life is a roll of the dice,
She wasnt meant to die, but it seems better off for her,
A widow at 20 with a son, jus been laid off from work,
I know im only fourteen and sho aint ready to be a father,
My life takin a twist, shit jus got so much more harder,
Money is something im workin towards, drivin a ford
Escort stolen, but I have to get u from place to place,


Put the ashes to the grave, wave bye bye to mami's face,
Therll be times people make rudeness as ure taste,
But were a strong family, between you and me,
People can question my authority, but let it be,
At the tender age of three, born in January 2003
Your mama died this week, but will live till infinity,
We seem stuck in a un breakable hole, but theres a route
The blindin light will lead us, God will help us out,
Havin you, ill be losin all my adolosence, but let it happen,
To get the money, cant go school so all by rappin
Your smile, even youre crying makes me wonder,
Is this a burden or a storm, if so let it thunder,
Im not gonna lie, its possible im gonna die,
But we gotta try, cmon baby dont cry........


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very very dope man, very emotional,

Put the ashes to the grave, wave bye bye to mami's face,
Therll be times people make rudeness as ure taste,

this line was dope seriously, very emotional like i said, u had a good vocab and a good structure, flow was pretty cool too, nice track man, put this on a very emotional beat and make it a dope track, im sure it be dope

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thanks alot man......

uppin fo intermental

thanks dawg...................

very emotional man... i was feelibng this you got lvoe for ya nephew man. make sure you look after him... like i said dope piece you asaid what you needed to and it was said pretty well i enjoyed reading it well done m,an

thanks I really appreciate, it and I will do

A very nice piece dawg..............good concept with good emotion........vocab was on par and it had a nice flow
7.5/10

Please could you rtf on my OM (The Ones You Love The Most Die First)in my sig!!!!

thanks alot yall.........