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Paranoid 08-18-05 03:29 AM

A World With No Water
 
A World With No Water

A Dry Throat Forever, So..
I picked myself up, when lost in the desert
Convicted by heat, hurts so much I cant convert
Almost no food, still without liquid for my breathe
Lost in such a drought, I’d only feel for death
Proceeding in cation, a mix between my option
So young, I needed adoption to try adaption
Without no water, just gave a malicious fact..
I couldn’t forgive, but I still was a vicious rat
Fighting for survival, why live to die then?
Reach for Christ’s reality, & never to cry when..
I spot failure, but still to capture a given guess
Unable to predict it, I felt a rapture driven press
When livin a yes, I’m never to portray a lie
And all this dryness would only delay a try
In the myth’s, I feel more and more hopeless
So I wished for help, hoping god would notice
Needing rain, without it, it’d be feeding shame
Proceeding in this game, I was cheating fame
Yet I was desperate, so hectic I wanted a drink
Measured so separate, yet I haunted a link..
A link to a river, needing to refresh my tongue
So I kept my head up, making stress my fun..
...
Somehow I knew, did god believe my question?
Or was it a pronunciation that strived a session
...
Finally A Chance To Survive..
My dream to quench my thirst, to bench my burst
Never to live this curse again, never for the worst
I prevail a provoked liquid, proven a missed thought
A lisped plot, bought a chance of a twist naught
A trick, I almost thought that was really for pretend
Pointed a certain way, but I wanted to sore extended
A vision to make a proper decision in my precision
The scheme to define it, without separation from it
And with such division, I’m lost in a worldwide view
Unable to pursue in life, stuck in a denied brew
To construct a livin with just one more need
When sweaty and thirsty, a taste would feed..me
No transition in my position for just one sip
Just to have one drink would make me flip
...
My story of a dreamt reality of pain..without water

Paranoid 08-18-05 03:44 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2373523

Journal!st 08-18-05 04:52 AM

ayo this peace was ill homie and decent man WERD.......was feeling it man DOPENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


RTF on my OM called on the rize or ARE YA FEELIN ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


here's on the rize: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204741

mizz fyre 08-18-05 06:40 AM

this was a pretty good drop.....flow was nice as well as structure...think you could maybe up your vocab a lil bit in some parts.....but overall a nice piece...keep it up


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