Handwriting Lyrics
 

koo good emotion cud work on flow a bit but overall good good imagery keep up but y is it in a picture?

that was nice...u had some gd stuff bro jus dat somewhere in d middle u kinna went off trackj but u came bak towards the end...vocab wasnt heavy though but...hey u could be better....

is that ur real handwriting?

hollat at my OM too and be honest...thanx

UNF I jus put it as a picturee, cos I wanted to see what It came out like.......lol......anyways tht was a quick free

nice dawg...good structure with good vocab.....but it should be longer!!!!

this wasn't too bad, I like the handwritten idea. But this should have been waaaayyyyyyy longer...also..this woulda been dope if you did the handwritten bit....and did it from the perspective of a slave back in the day, and spoke on how your slave master thinks your illiterate, and a savage...and everything else....that would have been extremely dope...but thats my opinion...good piece..stay up.

WORD THATS A GOOD IDEA..........yo thats a good idea thanks alot

ya that^^is a good idea do that man......if u want to do that holla at me for a ccollab...as for ur verse, good imagery nice concept i felt it......nice job :thumbup:

Yo I feel u....ill holla