evil vs Bussa Flow
 

Battle Rules:

8- 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 1

Check in by: 08-21-05 at 08:13 PM

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Bussa Flow has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-05 08:14 PM.

thinkin you hot shit ill show you to drop shit
you couldnt push weight standin in a mosh pit
claimin that you evil you probabely on that goth tip
black mascara on listenin to rock bitch
for problems i got clips the problems you not this
im a problem when i spit thats it im done havin fun
son gotta grab my gun run when you hear that thang
bang than ya brains hang like a chain i stay the same neva change just remain you lame n cant hang
ill mangle ya frame leave you no stranger to pain
you could drop like rain get lit up like thunder
ya fuckin wit numba 1 like mcgradys number

evil has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-05 10:06 PM.

yo! this noob think he hot but really he cold as snow*
he can't rap if his life depened on bussa flow*
im writing a quick key so i can beat thee
you aint a real emcee just a kid who seen 8mile on tv
this is gonna be a easy win so ill sit back and smile**
i hope you don't come wack just like yuor freestyle**
haha im the big bad bully gonna take your lunches
your the oppisite of mike tyson you can't thrwo punches
your done i kill all you wack guys
cause you couldnt bless the mic if you were baptized


*- his name is bussa flow
**-http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204945

This was feedback posted for Bussa Flow
 

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ya not sopposed to put 1 posts to vote tho

uppppin 4 votesssss

Voted For: Bussa Flow

BF took this easy. better punches, decent wordplay. while evil didnt bring anything. you need to drop original concepts & use better personals. overall - BF got this. due to a harder verse.

BF, rtf in my sig or ill have this vote DQd.

uppppin 4 votesssss

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Voted For: evil

BUSSA FLOWS BREAKDOWN:
thinkin you hot shit ill show you to drop shit
you couldnt push weight standin in a mosh pit
4/10 kinda lame
claimin that you evil you probabely on that goth tip
black mascara on listenin to rock bitch
3/10 soft hit
for problems i got clips the problems you not this
im a problem when i spit thats it im done havin fun
0/10 didnt rhyme and no direct hit
son gotta grab my gun run when you hear that thang
bang than ya brains hang like a chain i stay the same
3/10 noooope
neva change just remain you lame n cant hang
ill mangle ya frame leave you no stranger to pain
3/10 u tried
you could drop like rain get lit up like thunder
ya fuckin wit numba 1 like mcgradys number
1/10 thats played and coulda been said betta

YA FLOW: not that good
YA STRUCTURE: way off
YA PUNCHES: very weak
YA WORDPLAY: ...................
YA MULTIZ: none
YA GRAMMER: mediocre
YA PERSONALS: blah


ILL_NOISE BREAKDOWN:
yo! this noob think he hot but really he cold as snow*
he can't rap if his life depened on bussa flow*
4/10 that was iight
im writing a quick key so i can beat thee
you aint a real emcee just a kid who seen 8mile on tv
3/10 ...........
this is gonna be a easy win so ill sit back and smile**
i hope you don't come wack just like yuor freestyle**
4/10 jea this is a easy win lol
haha im the big bad bully gonna take your lunches
your the oppisite of mike tyson you can't thrwo punches
5/10 best line so far
your done i kill all you wack guys
cause you couldnt bless the mic if you were baptized
6/10 i take that back, this was da best line

YA FLOW: on point
YA STRUCTURE: not that good
YA PUNCHES: 50/50
YA WORDPLAY: had nice wordplay
YA MULTIZ: none
YA GRAMMER: jus iight
YA PERSONALS: on point


OVERALL: ILL_Noise


rtf.....links in sig

Voted For: evil

yo! this noob think he hot but really he cold as snow*
he can't rap if his life depened on bussa flow*
4....ok
im writing a quick key so i can beat thee
you aint a real emcee just a kid who seen 8mile on tv
3...this whole "u came here from 8 mile" thing is played
this is gonna be a easy win so ill sit back and smile**
i hope you don't come wack just like yuor freestyle**
6...decent personal
haha im the big bad bully gonna take your lunches
your the oppisite of mike tyson you can't thrwo punches
3..tyson's punches are gone...weak punch
your done i kill all you wack guys
cause you couldnt bless the mic if you were baptized
4...too basic...

thinkin you hot shit ill show you to drop shit
you couldnt push weight standin in a mosh pit
2...basic punch
claimin that you evil you probabely on that goth tip
black mascara on listenin to rock bitch
2...retarded
for problems i got clips the problems you not this
im a problem when i spit thats it im done havin fun
3...said problem too much and not much of a punch..more like self glorifing
son gotta grab my gun run when you hear that thang
bang than ya brains hang like a chain i stay the same
4....this bar flowed....but punch suked
neva change just remain you lame n cant hang
ill mangle ya frame leave you no stranger to pain
2..no punches..just threats
you could drop like rain get lit up like thunder
ya fuckin wit numba 1 like mcgradys number
2...no punch...AGAIN

Well..this was a weak battle.But Evil got this easy.

Bussa..you were self glorifing too much.Like the "u a problem/fun" line.And there was an avalache of threats from the keyboard.Like that "grab my gun/run","fukin with 1 like mcgrady"....that's all threats.And it's stupuid.Just trow punches to diss.

Vote-Evil
rtf below in 3 days....or this vote will be removed :thumbup:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206789

.................................................. .upppinnnn

Voted For: evil

ok Bussa.
you couldnt push weight standin in a mosh pit
I liked that one.
Rest of your verse completely sucked. what are u 9? .314/10

ok....noise
Not that this was that much better. But slightly. you made a lil more sense with you shit.
But by no means good. .315/10

Voted For: evil

your done i kill all you wack guys
cause you couldnt bless the mic if you were baptized

best line in the battle... y'all gotta step up y'all game, but i went off of better punches.. I'm feelin ILL noise, he didn't just ramble on and his flow was a little bit better than Bussa Flow's... y'all gotta work at throwing better punches altogether and using more metas or try wordplay... get creative..

v/ ILL-Noize