MeTaFo' vs Intermental
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-19-05 at 11:18 AM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

MeTaFo' has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-05 10:49 AM.

Intermental has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-05 11:02 AM.

Silly Faggot' Dicks-Are-For- Chicks', Fuck-Ya'-Verse, It's Time To -Deflower- This Trick'...
Like A To-Be-Continued-Movie', It's Time I Put An Ending -To -This'..
Can't Think Of Lines' To Defend- Yourself - With',{Damn}..../
Give Me Ya' Diss-Verse Before You Dis-Perse And I'll Write Da' Ending- To-It..../ :
Got your knees shakin' when my-rhymes-rattle-ya-balance-like-gats.../
I awaken wastin-my-time-battlin'-talentless-cats...
you ain't even fit - to- lick' my shoes, your rhymes are- lower- class
like a backwards digestive system, you get Fed-UP your ass

LOL, My nigga Intermental...Whassup bwoy?

Remember first floor? haha...yupp...

Cant teach who dont wannabe taught, my puns leave you shitless an distraught
You couldnt even serve while practicin your hobby on the court!*
I always thought you was a cool cat, so i decided ''Yeah, i'll school-the-whack'
Dedicated a track too London,
.............but you didnt mention its ya own religion that did the attack!**
With one one slap, I'll snap ya back, lookin like your dancin the Limbo
This kids so dumb...He went too fisher price for his first pair of Timbos!***
lemme show you how a win-goes, few puns, I chew bums like you
c'mon dog, you gotta love me, even ya profile says your reppin my old crew!****


Explanations:
*=On his msn profile it says his intrest is tennis lol, you serve in tennis lol. an the opening line was because he was in the elevation crew first floor

**=he did that dedication track to the people in london, an he's a muslim (according to his msn profile lol)

***=timbos are timbalands, just clear that up in case some people didnt know

****=on his profile on rv, his crew says ''R.A.W'' lol


Uppin this, an if you dont understand any of the verses, simply dont vote.

Good luck inter.

Voted For: Intermental

ok..lets brake this down...........

inter:
flowed well........
some nice punches....could be harder
structure...lines were little streched....
some of them have more words and that makes linesdifferent lenght....

metafo:
some hard punches....
flow wasnt as gd as inters.....
u had some different lenght ines too....
lol...some funny punches.......

overal:both of u did well......but i give this 1 for inter....
..............no hate..........

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but intermental...wtf up wit yo structure?
stop with the hypens,startin every word wit a capital,the dots,and this(/).

sorry if its misleadin i was readin a thread sayin "HOW TO MAKE U A BETTER BATTLER" and took tips, so i implented it into my newst battle.........

Voted For: MeTaFo'

Inter's verse

Silly Faggot' Dicks-Are-For- Chicks', Fuck-Ya'-Verse, It's Time To -Deflower- This Trick'...
Like A To-Be-Continued-Movie', It's Time I Put An Ending -To -This'..

^^^alrite opener, coulda been better though^^^

Can't Think Of Lines' To Defend- Yourself - With',{Damn}..../
Give Me Ya' Diss-Verse Before You Dis-Perse And I'll Write Da' Ending- To-It..../ :

^^^yeah i liked that punch but the first line let it down

Got your knees shakin' when my-rhymes-rattle-ya-balance-like-gats.../
I awaken wastin-my-time-battlin'-talentless-cats...

^^^sorry fam that line had no effect

you ain't even fit - to- lick' my shoes, your rhymes are- lower- class
like a backwards digestive system, you get Fed-UP your ass

^^^funny, but somewhat confusing closer

Metafo's verse

Cant teach who dont wannabe taught, my puns leave you shitless an distraught
You couldnt even serve while practicin your hobby on the court!*

^^^lol nice opener. nice personal

I always thought you was a cool cat, so i decided ''Yeah, i'll school-the-whack'
Dedicated a track too London,
.............but you didnt mention its ya own religion that did the attack!**

^^^ohhhhhhhhh shit that had to hurt...daymn

With one one slap, I'll snap ya back, lookin like your dancin the Limbo
This kids so dumb...He went too fisher price for his first pair of Timbos!***

^^^nuthin special....plain 1st line self glorification and 2nd line weak diss

lemme show you how a win-goes, few puns, I chew bums like you
c'mon dog, you gotta love me, even ya profile says your reppin my old crew!****

^^^funny closer

Look no hate whatsoever cos intermentals my dawg but i just thought Meta came really hard against him in this one....and the was nothin enough to hit back at him......

no hate....

v/MeTaFo'

~peace~

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