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Her
Her  The first time I met you, I felt touched inside. Your smile, so gorgeous gurl, Inspired from your pride. To know your mine, Someone I can talk to when down. But I can’t hold back, My feelings make me frown. This question I have is very known, But with heart we can shine. If we we’re to hold each other, Would that be fine? So what I’m saying is, That I want us together. At least could we try it?, And maybe be connected forever. Cameo All I want is you, Nothing or not even anyone else. |
first of all let me say damn they fine..let me talk to one of them
ok as for ur poem..it was alright..kinda basic..a little corny..its cool though..she'll probly like it. |
what am i suppose to say i love her?
thats just retarded. and the one on the left is cameo. |
If ONLY she was a Lesbian ;).....
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naw man im saying she'll like it so dont worry about it..most girls are suckers for poems..well from my experience.
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well im new to here but i kno how to give feed so yea.....
Well when i first read this i dident see the little line that seperates the post and your signature so i saw Fuck your intellegence so i thought *damn he fucked up* lol BUT ANYWAY.....This piece was good.. nice way to tell her how u really feel......vocab was simple but in this case simple is good.....your imagrey (cant judge it cuz you gave a pic) all around this piece will get the job done.....i liked it cuz i can realate so yea good ish..... be safe Uno |
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