brandon vs Kwar N. Teen
 

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Check in by: 08-21-05 at 04:25 AM

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Brandon has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 04:25 AM.

Kwar N. Teen has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 04:28 AM.

You changed the rules when you set it....well then I guess you're gay...
If you ate cereal it would be the only time you'd be Special......K?...
You stink bad and ya verses are more ass...so that's what the stench is...
I would pitch you an idea...but you would need a baseball to catch it...
2 days...fuck that...I will just end you now...cuz we all know this fella is swept...
If directions told faggotness....right being Straight....then he's left...
You could spit a good verse....but you might as well not even try this...
I'll Kwar N Teen this bitch...like I'm Spam Blocker and he was a virus!


FUCK 2 DAYS

smoldered n charred, cant carry my weight - so ya shoulders are scarred.
plus like experts at limbo, to even compete you had to lower the bars..?
press ya flesh, leave ya 'lines shook' like 'mistakes on an etch a sketch'.
i flex the wess, battlin K? i thought 'brand (k)new' i was 'fresh to death'..
i'll make ya chestless, i 'stole ya shine' - might as well 'take ya necklace'.
cause fuck effort!.. i could 'eat bran half asleep' like 'flakes for breakfast'..
no one cops ya trash, hesitate to shoot N trust - i react and pop ya fast.
stop, ya trash! see 'don-key whack', that explains why ya 'drops are ass'..

umm................votes?

and what the fuck is with this 50 character minimum shit..

how come aint no one vote around here?............

Uppin cmon vote people

This was feedback posted for Kwar N. Teen
 

checkin pols.......................................

Voted For: Brandon

this was a cool battle from both of you

Kwar N. Teen -

smoldered n charred, cant carry my weight - so ya shoulders are scarred.
plus like experts at limbo, to even compete you had to lower the bars..?
kinda weak. not really feeling this line right here..5/10

press ya flesh, leave ya 'lines shook' like 'mistakes on an etch a sketch'.
i flex the wess, battlin K? i thought 'brand (k)new' i was 'fresh to death'..
this was an ok bar..your first line was better than the second..5/10

i'll make ya chestless, i 'stole ya shine' - might as well 'take ya necklace'.
cause fuck effort!.. i could 'eat bran half asleep' like 'flakes for breakfast'..
this was better. good punch...6/10

no one cops ya trash, hesitate to shoot N trust - i react and pop ya fast.
stop, ya trash! see 'don-key whack', that explains why ya 'drops are ass'..
very funny. your best bar. i liked this one...8/10

24/40
I think you need to get more punches in there. you had some decent wordplay but none of it was formed well enough to make a hard hitting punch. i would like to see more personals also. other than that, your closer was really funny.

Brandon -
You changed the rules when you set it....well then I guess you're gay...
If you ate cereal it would be the only time you'd be Special......K?...
very funny line. wish you coulda set it up better though. good wordplay...8/10
You stink bad and ya verses are more ass...so that's what the stench is...
I would pitch you an idea...but you would need a baseball to catch it...
decent wordplay. but kinda played concept...6/10
2 days...fuck that...I will just end you now...cuz we all know this fella is swept...
If directions told faggotness....right being Straight....then he's left...
gay jokes are kinda played as well...5/10
You could spit a good verse....but you might as well not even try this...
I'll Kwar N Teen this bitch...like I'm Spam Blocker and he was a virus!
very good closer. good wordplay and good personal...8/10

27/40
You had some decent punches in here. You only had one personal but that was still cool. Good wordplay. Your verse was on point. Flow was good. Just work on some better wordplay cause a lot of concepts are played out.


Brandon wins

Voted For: Kwar N. Teen

smoldered n charred, cant carry my weight - so ya shoulders are scarred.
plus like experts at limbo, to even compete you had to lower the bars..?

vs

nothing


meh.. I expected to see better verses in the FL’s.. but I guess u
two need some work.. one of them is to add some personals in
there.. make ur verse more enjoyin to read while u throwin
good punches at ur opponent.. both flows were okay here.. structure
was aight.. and hardly had any nice punches here.. but overall
keep elevatin more though..

thanx for honesty.....1-1

Voted For: Kwar N. Teen

Kwar had better flow and his punches just kept on hitton harder and harder...both didnt have heavy vocabs tho...but kwar made use of some nice ones...brandon ur verse didnt entertain cos it didnt have some humour in it...the punches were quite soft and dry...plus ur closer didnt really make sense to me...nice job from both sides but kwar gets this for a more hard hittin verse and brandon just work a lil more on ur punches...thats all

drop honest and xplained votes in 1 of my battles or this will be deleted...fo real....thanx

Voted For: Brandon

brendon took this i think he had miore personals n better punches it seemed kwars shit woz stretched n fucked up structure n half of thwe punches didnt connect ya know?good try but brend took dis

Voted For: Brandon

You changed the rules when you set it....well then I guess you're gay...
If you ate cereal it would be the only time you'd be Special......K?...
(Nice)
You stink bad and ya verses are more ass...so that's what the stench is...
I would pitch you an idea...but you would need a baseball to catch it...
(I think you meant glove....Ok punch)
2 days...fuck that...I will just end you now...cuz we all know this fella is swept...
If directions told faggotness....right being Straight....then he's left...
(I get it but wording was off...decent)
You could spit a good verse....but you might as well not even try this...
I'll Kwar N Teen this bitch...like I'm Spam Blocker and he was a virus!
(Nice closer)

vs.

smoldered n charred, cant carry my weight - so ya shoulders are scarred.
plus like experts at limbo, to even compete you had to lower the bars..?
(Aiight)
press ya flesh, leave ya 'lines shook' like 'mistakes on an etch a sketch'.
i flex the wess, battlin K? i thought 'brand (k)new' i was 'fresh to death'..
(That's ok)
i'll make ya chestless, i 'stole ya shine' - might as well 'take ya necklace'.
cause fuck effort!.. i could 'eat bran half asleep' like 'flakes for breakfast'..
(Played....but decent)
no one cops ya trash, hesitate to shoot N trust - i react and pop ya fast.
stop, ya trash! see 'don-key whack', that explains why ya 'drops are ass'..
(Ok good)

For more consistence I think brandon got this...but it was a good match nonetheless....good job you both...

v/Brandon