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Mentor 08-20-05 10:02 PM

my last resort
 
i've been rappin since my birth certificate
i've been significant since i ever been in it
& im living it so just take one big wiff of it
im no homo and i know that i have no flow
im gettin hold though tryin til i grow old yo
im leavin a note so u know im good though
all the witnesses no that im the best in this
since i can put 2gether the best sentences
raps dead, i'm guessin where the legends is
yes it is and you know so why u even argue
we too far to get more legendz that all true
im not a average young teen no wut i mean
rap the best dream but i lost my selfesteem
fuck audios i aint gone go in until i go in rite
& thats exactly why im typing this open mic
i aint gon go in sight untill im just flowin rite
i can't get by by myself till i can find myself
this my last resort im relying on rv 4 support
but everytime i just get my esteem cut short
or maybe ill just have 2 cut my own life short
cuz my mind's soar & i've lost what i write for:(

Mentor 08-20-05 10:05 PM

this just a preview of whats ta come for o.m's cuz im gon do o.m's ta try ta find my own style and get my shit out while i try elevatin in audios...i aint gon drop no more audios till i can get myself dope enough ta be atleast decent...and i noticed alotta fools are mixin me up for a wack mc wit lyrics too if so then try ta beat this shit..aint impossible but u cant be no newbie neither.....anyway leave some feed on this short ish i did and expect more ta see from me for a lil while

Mentor 08-20-05 10:12 PM

there's my link
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=204027&page=2

NaRc-UzI 08-20-05 10:36 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Straight Aim
i've been rappin since my birth certificate
i've been significant since i ever been in it
& im living it so just take one big wiff of it
im no homo and i know that i have no flow
im gettin hold though tryin til i grow old yo
im leavin a note so u know im good though
all the witnesses no that im the best in this
since i can put 2gether the best sentences
raps dead, i'm guessin where the legends is
yes it is and you know so why u even argue
we too far to get more legendz that all true
im not a average young teen no wut i mean
rap the best dream but i lost my selfesteem
fuck audios i aint gone go in until i go in rite
& thats exactly why im typing this open mic
i aint gon go in sight untill im just flowin rite
i can't get by by myself till i can find myself
this my last resort im relying on rv 4 support
but everytime i just get my esteem cut short
or maybe ill just have 2 cut my own life short
cuz my mind's soar & i've lost what i write for:(



THIS WAS PREETY GOOD,BUT YOUR LYRICS ARE TOO BASIC,BUT I SEE ALOT OF POTENTIAL SO KEEP DOING YOU

Mentor 08-21-05 04:11 AM

uppin...........

Yvonne 08-21-05 05:04 AM

kinna basic level but it was tight...you had some cool stuff in there...flow was off in some places but still cool tho...keep it up fam

holla at mine

Mentor 08-21-05 04:02 PM

aight thanx for the feed come on ya'll how fuckin hard is it ta read sumthin this small and leave feed??? ya'll sleepin on rap

Kawn Flixx 08-21-05 08:36 PM

Closed leave adequate feedback...dont leave one lines..just skimming through it so you can put it as a link..leave good feeback..what he can work on..how you liked the peice,..go through the cateogries..Wordplay ..Vocab...imagery...and anything else you might fell you need to add


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