''Slave'' -Time's Up-
 

Hook:
I'll let the rhymes-cook, an with one fine-hook..
I describe how You's a slave too my rhyme-book
Spit'n'Spray, The street way, can u hear the nine-buck?
Open ya eyes n ears, an realize that......your time's up!

...Multi-Talented Individual...
Follow my art....Makin merkin a masterpeice, I'll blast-ya-peeps
foreCast defeat...I'm in the drivin seat, everlastin heat.........
..burnin thru ya rib-cage, I ripp-tha-page, flip it then repeat
Long barrel nosel, one shot..ya heartbeat stops, like movin feet to a beat
the elite one..punchin lungs from left too right, I'm the best in sight
when i drop you know its Hot....where as the rest-just...Might..
consistantly keep you distantly below my Inventory...
so i'm above you, an I rubb you with a shotti instantly
slugs greet ya mug, leave you with a constant smile....
So u check da flow now an the expression says ya love my style
God didnt brace me with talent, Bitch...its called Hard work..
The way i'm beatin you with ''class''
...................................You'd think i ran ya down in a merc! {the car}
My position is deserved, one of RV's most hated but thats what bein great-did
leave nothin debated...Its annamous..
............you can try change facts, but your about 16 years too late, kid!
Highly rated.........among those who can write a real rhyme
an for those who cant....I'm so ''nice''..I'll let you steal-mine!

Hook:
I'll let the rhymes-cook, an with one fine-hook..
I describe how You's a slave too my rhyme-book
Spit'n'Spray, The street way, can u hear the nine-buck?
Open ya eyes n ears, an realize that......your time's up!

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Blah, just a quick somthin....Listnin too We shootin an got the idea for a hook so just thought i'd go with the flow on this, Uppin for feed...

Move this too the freestyle section Indeph.....

Uppin too....

Best shit Ive ever seen from you.

Period.

Thank you...

But i wouldnt agree, Just improved in my usage of wordplay a little.

uppin tho....

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this was a pretty good piece, nice flow on it
My position is deserved, one of RV's most hated but thats what bein great-did
leave nothin debated...Its annamous..
^^^lol i liked this line....keep it up and good luck in our battle.......

Thanks for the feed mami....Good luck to you too....

yeah this was good but let me drop this stuff right here dawg

legit with plenty of dare got rhymes that fit anywhere look i'll thrill a dome true with silicone glue eliminate hassles and demonstrate for bastards teach dudes pages and each include knowledge about slavery on route to bravery but fuck duck the whiplash as my script smash brains

Why the fuck do you always type your little gay ass keystyles everywhere?

Uppin....

Yo this was hot, mad wordplay, great work, 8/10

ask you the same why your little conceded ass hole never peep my verse so be it for real

This was nice man, homes, you are the only one on this site who knows how to rap hard it seems?...yo homes...this shit was dope ese...can you help me elevate

LMAOOOOOOOO ^^^

word ''essa'' ....rhyme is straight off the culo LOL..
I love mexicans/lations....always make me laugh :)

Lol, will you help me out ese?