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So you didnt know?
So u didnt know..
My immaculate speeches stay in track with my thesis Harmonic demonic style, that infact melted my preaches Many see this, my speaches blemish on the pull of a lever How time perish at my fist, the way i always end-ever/endeavour Forever bliblical, 2000 years mimical, i gimic my luck Stuck in a ritual, i appear so digital, radio's cant pick me up Although physical, role reversin reference jay just one try My flow lyrical, weeps diversion my direction let the song cry An affection of perfection, cut the emotion wiv a knife Motion everytime i reach perfection i look back on my life So i stife,So if you didnt know, then why should i? Why should i try to abide to survive as the forts i combine My fears n tears alligned blueprint my whole souls design Why should i even pick up a pen Maybe cus it attracts foxes to my cocks Like kidnapping a hen? Or maybe it saves me on an intellectual level Stearing an unknown soul away from peril? A concluding alliance, the obience makes my gut fatter But like disproving science, it doesnt seem to matter So u win some u loose some, where some choose to sin Im at the point of my life, where everytime i loose i win Chea' ill edit in the links soon enough Dont sleep on this this some real shit for u now uh |
U knw what I think of this, OM of the month for reel
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this was very nice piece, had off the chain multis off the chain vocabulary...the bad structure didnt even matter cuz it still had good flow....very nice man keep it up :thumbup: deff. o/m of the month!
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Thanks ye i get what ya mean about structure yo but i feel thats irrelevant to flow ya know??
Def appreciated uppin |
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Voted on all the aboves that left feed pieces
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this is a well deserved Om of the motnh foreal verything was on point keep it up man
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U should actuially nominate if thats the way u feel
Thanks for the feed def.appreciated looking for more feed |
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