metafo' vs mizz fyre
 

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Expired battle close - win

mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 07:11 AM.

MeTaFo' has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 07:45 AM.

Dear son

I’m sorry I left you at this vulnerable time, always knew I just wouldn’t cope
The doctors telling me, that you’d never regain your senses, there’s no hope
I couldn’t handle seeing my little boy going through his life so tormented
You had such an imagination, no limit to the stories that you invented

Your eyes used to sparkle but after the accident you lost your personality
Losing my mentality, you were to young to become the victim of a fatality
I know you want me to come back, but I can’t, the real me, I’m seeking
Hope they can get in touch with me, when you finally start speaking

Dear mother

I said my first words since the accident, with all my thoughts compiled
I smiled, looked them in the eye and uttered “I’m such a lonely child”
My mother abandoned me and left me to deal with life’s hard trial
In disbelief when I was born, but tell me ma’, are you still in denial?

How can you justify leaving me, when it was only you that I needed
Sneaking out in the night, no second thoughts, you just proceeded
What was it ma’? did I ruin your reputation being so far from the “norm”
How can it be that selfishness is the only emotion you’re able to perform

Dear son

I got your letter, you sound bitter, but you know I don’t deserve the blame
Such a shame, that after the accident I had no control over what became
I had to leave, gather my thoughts, give you some space and make a break
To be honest son, the truth is, giving birth to you was a terrible mistake
I’m glad your finally talking again son, its good that we keep in touch
Hope you can get on with your life now and don’t think of me too much

Dear mother
A MISTAKE!!!, you said you wanted me to be a part of your world
Is that why, you don’t care about me, into my own life I was hurled
I dreamt about you last night ma’, I kept seeing us in different places
Now today there’s so many holes in my heart, I can’t fill the spaces
I’ve realised what I need to do, I hear the skies, me their calling
Goodbye ma’, I think its kicking in now, I feel like I’m falling

Dear son
I haven’t heard from you in a while, your last letter, I can’t recall
Tell me son, is it that you’ve taken your life, did you really end it all………

The 3 steps to abondment...Take a stroll with me yo :cool:


....''I thought you had my back?''....
Its a calm night, Little did i know i was getting into a fight
There was my crew, and about 16 enemies lookin on in fright
they pulled out knives i really couldnt believe my eyes
I guess thats when my boys ran 'cause they realized
my foes planned a suprize attack, I was flat out on my back
Next thing i knew i woke in a hospital bed with limbs not in tact
Its a fact, I was abondoned an not even one visit after i took the beatin
Then they had the nerve too actually send me a get well greetin!
So i replied, anger in my eyes...They knew deep down they did wrong
But Then again it turns out...My friends set me up all along!


....''A Lost Soul''....
February 1st, 1989...They cut the cord and it was time....
For me too shine, or so I was led too believe....
But it was just the beginning of a mother abondening her seed
Usually people switch babies at birth, but i was born with a curse
The woman who put me on this earth, is nowhere to be found
Wrapped in a blanket...she didnt care where she layed me down
as lons as she was rid of a helpless child that she left out in the wild
I just prey to god she isnt out there now with a smile
I hope she regrets what she did, and crys herself to sleep
'Cause death is what she deserves for bein so weak!

....''Love Is__''....
I was taught.....Love is suppose to be a good feeling...
suppose to wake you up in the morning and reach for the ceiling
Keeps you alive, keeps you tickin' thru these hard times...
Then i lost my first battle....and So I abondend my rhymes
Thought the ink had ran dry, And my brain seemed to be tired
Then too top it all...My boss called me an said i was Fired
Life was at an all time low, I never thought i'd keep my head up
No more sketchin with a pencil, I retired and hung the Led up
I was told i could make it, I was given nothin but propps...
Its funny how failure on one minor occassion can make love stop.

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Checking This Out Being Mizz Is In The Council As Well Good Shit Girl.

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^^^lol i have no clue.....but thanx for the feed.......uppin ya'll

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This was feedback posted for mizz fyre
 

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nice drops to both...

This was feedback posted for mizz fyre
 

both were mad good......very close at that........