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werrd, one of my first songs... first on soundclick
leave some feed

www.soundclick.com/youngblay

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205646
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205630

come on lets get some feed....

blay, noone can leave feed yet...
song has to clear since you jus signed up for soundclick...
itll be up 2morrow

i signed up a long time ago
u can listen to the lofi version, its like that for all new songs

oh w/e

well you sent me the track soo....
its not bad
the intro is kinda ehh, could be better...or just not necessary really..
but your emotion is actually better tthan most kids on their first track, i was impressed...
flow is ok, nothing that amazes me
lyrically wise its str8 south, which doesnt bother me...i like southern music :)

so weerd man, a pretty decent job...especially for a first

werrd :cool:

yeah, forgot to tell yall this is my first.
thanks Tizz

noooooooooooooot me...lol:) ill leave feed when it clears...lo-fi will fuck u all up

Intro HELLA lame lol no lie
delivery is bad, flow is very very very basic... lyrics not good some say southern... nut idk
Listening on lo-fi so i aint gonna say ur quality is hella wack, but it needs uppn fo sho
WOrk on ur shit more before you record
sound like you were reading in some spots cuz i fell off and like waited for the beat to pick back up..

3/10
Honest feed fam
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yeah i appreciate that man
see this shit is what drives me to do more and to do better, cuz everytime i listen to it i hear where i fucked it up and what i should have done better....

and i aint lyin when i say first audio tho
i had just done 1 battle before

hifi has cleared now....

beats ill..
quality is not very good..vocals need 2 be put uo alot..
i think the lyrics are sick, but the delivery and emotion is lacking..
i think some of your adlibs are a bit out of time..

overall cool track..

peep my shit..

peace
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