Will rap for food
 

Verse for track with nos on cunninlynguists beat.

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I like mics, gotta clutch like jordan,
clutch the mic n cord like he clutch the ball n'
I like life, but ill take ya life like an abortion,
sharp witted, im causin contortions
I might slice ya body in portions,
and I aint no animal I got dope prose, dope flows
so cold i'll have ya nose froze like the coke you been snortin
cut you up like a foreskin, dont give a fuck about laws kid..
like forcin a fortune out an unfortunate foreman
ima bad omen.. like thunder and lightning i'll appear when its pouring
a misfit. some consider me foreign.. I say suck on this bitch
I might be twisted...
Been trapped n' rapped up in a box half my life... no wonder im so gifted
.. my flows lifted above and beyond what comes outta you fuckers n' pawns
you hop on top of a beat... fuck that, I make love to the song
Dopium, the dudes who rock... drinkin booze for blocks
rap and prove im hot, and at the same time prove you're not
This fool and nos, the cats that'll snatch you outta ya shoes n' socks
..motherfuckers.

The game is to be sold not told :)

huuuhh? .... Im real stupid, you cant be saying crazy metaphorical things

lol, you know what Im saying.

why would you waste your lyrics in Rv's open mic? especially if they planned for production.

Well im not really "wasting" them... im still gonna use em... and theyre gonna be posted on soundclick anyway. Its always good to get constructive feed.. specially since I havent dropped in a while and I need to get my knack back for this mixtape.

yeh I feel that, i just feel like Ive heard enough crit from rv to know what people are interested in hearing. So I have no need to post open mics and get there opinions. but yeh I spose it makes alot of sense just to double check your lyrics.

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UPPIN.

Remember to leave a link... ill give you feed that helps you improve.

i liked it
metaphors where nice
flow good
and structure was real nice
the vocab and wordplay were nice
but yeah nothing really bad about this drop...
keep doing your thing man..e.zZ

nice shit omb i'm dropping on this track aswell.

Yea I Like This Piece Man Real Good Piece Man Keep It Up Yea

ye dawg a real nice drop.....nice meta's.....good vocab.....with a very nice flow!!!!
well done!!!!
7.5/10