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Random Thoughts (Keystyle)
-Lou C. Ferr: Ay Keysha, you know you gotta earn these niggas respect here right?
-Keysha: Yea, I know -Lou: Well right now just hit them in the head with a simple keystyle ma -Keysha: Fa sho -steps up to the mic- aiight, turn it up a little...right there! That's perfect, you getting me right? Aiight Chica, whew! This is just some random shit off the top of the dome// In Chicago its cold like penguin piss, so I keeps the chrome// lettin the heat touch crews like trips to cancun// but somewhere along the line, the truth will come out// it's only so long that fakes can run off at the mouth// guess bein meek you worthless can you do beats a service?// Droppin beneath the searches kinda defeats the purpose// people drop audios but it takes weeks to rehearse it// but it's cool to use text to preach and reach the surface// so I'll jus release these verses that'll make the feeble wordless// conceived in tainted ovaries during a seige of a churches steeple// "We must pray for these people and hope God treats them equal"// Keysha a pessimistic sadomasachist// wit a established passion for the passionate pacifist// can you imagine it?// I've amassed hits like snipers in war// and this is my 18th year in this tour and I'm going for more// wondering when will Hip Hop ever really open it's door// I'm just stuck spittin text in Open Mics and corner stores// always seems like I only spit when I get bored// How about you? Ha, the bitch is skatterbrain right now. You feeling that Lou? -Lou: Yea, that'll open a couple eyes. That's enough for right now, prepare for the next session |
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let's rise to the top like oil on water
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iight keystyle very bad structure....................cant say much else ya vocab and multis was basic rhyme scheme was weak...4.5/10 keep postin and elevatin and rtf!
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your structure is similar to mines but mines is 4.5/10, okay. Appreciate the feed anyways. Can I get some more
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I liked this verse...the content seems complex in meaning..but simple & to the point as far as word usage...the multi's used were nice as well...good vocab & wordplay also contributed...My favorite parts were the following
guess bein meek you worthless can you do beats a service?// Droppin beneath the searches kinda defeats the purpose// people drop audios but it takes weeks to rehearse it// & wondering when will Hip Hop ever really open it's door// I'm just stuck spittin text in Open Mics and corner stores// Overall..this was a good verse..only thing I can really dispute on is structure..but it doesn't matter that much...keep doin what you do |
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eh i havent been around long but ive seen better.. but on the other hand, it was ok 7/10
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