Krooked vs *.Fame.*
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-25-05 at 11:52 PM

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*.Fame.* has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-05 01:02 AM.

not gettin cheese n respect n you being a vet?,HA! that's funny
& you cutting the green in half cuz you neva fully get the money*
merkin without a sound or mourning..he's bound to be torn in
n wreck-stale?(rexdale)..yea,cuz the town's broken down n boring**
i don't bother with the rednecks..shit,i be hunting in the coast
after this,my record'd be 1-0(10),kinda like the # of your posts***
like bakery's running well..I'ma give you the right pounding profoundin
u the only one I know who had an in-throw(intro) that was grounded
i must of massacred the fuck outta leprecauns way u skimping outta luck
makin a thread in bitchslapped for newbs cuz simply
.................................................. .................................YOU SUCK!


*in his signature..he halves the words so that one side's green
**his location is "rexdale".
***he has 10 posts.....at the time of me makin this verse

UNDERSTAND BOTH VERSES OR DON"T VOTE...GOOD LUCK KROOKED :thumbup:

Krooked has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-05 01:05 AM.

uppin for votes.....dont sleep.....

Voted For: Krooked

not gettin cheese n respect n you being a vet?,HA! that's funny
& you cutting the green in half cuz you neva fully get the money*
...first line wasnt really a punch and second line was aiight..god wordplay 6/10
merkin without a sound or mourning..he's bound to be torn in
n wreck-stale?(rexdale)..yea,cuz the town's broken down n boring**
1st line filler and second line was aiight 6/10
i don't bother with the rednecks..shit,i be hunting in the coast
after this,my record'd be 1-0(10),kinda like the # of your posts***
this wasnt really a diss.....blah 6/10
like bakery's running well..I'ma give you the right pounding profoundin
u the only one I know who had an in-throw(intro) that was grounded
hmm...this was prolly ur best line 7/10
i must of massacred the fuck outta leprecauns way u skimping outta luck
makin a thread in bitchslapped for newbs cuz simply
.................................................. .................................YOU SUCK!
this was aiight..blah 6/10

overall: 31/50

this shit was aiight you got talent but work on your punches...like your lines could of been good but they wasnt hittin hard enough


Krooked:

my flow is like intercourse damn its so sexual,
i got 1 style and 1 flow so call me a homo-text-ual,
s'aiight this was really a self glorifying line 6/10
the way you act its a quick way to get stuck like a sticker,
when you rap, you get "booze" and i aint talking bout "liquor",
lol this was a sick puinch 8/10....had me laughin
spit my "bars" krooked, just to fuck wit his "grind",
its like im the opposite of the bible,cuz i kurupted his mind,
this shit was decent 7/10
dont chew nigga, you get rabbies for biting my drops,
fuck a mic, i spit into a flashlight, to enlighten your thoughts,
this was pretty sick..nice line 8/10
i see a hesitation in ya verse common breathe cuzzin,
cuz like a blind bitch givin head u wont see whats cummin,
lol...this line was aiight 6/10
Fuck a bitch, the tek 9 is my "main squeeze",
your shawty got "ice in her mouth" giving me "brain freeze"...
this shit was aiight 6/10

overall: 41/60

nice punches....just need to word yo drops betta but styll u got talent


vote: krooked becuz of betta punches

1-0 up me upping.........

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vote up people dont sleep.................................

upping for votes...dont sleep on the battle...