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Valiant 08-25-05 06:06 PM

Little Tribute
 
Im NY's most finest
Some niggas can't hide it,
When they get tossed in tha can
They'll see the rhythm of violence.
WHY THIS?
I don't know?
WHY THIS?
It's how I roll
a constant flow
how I stroll
a constant show
without a host
without a boost
muthafucka, Im without a toast.
So yall Gs gotta give me tha props
AND, dont make it feel like a movie plot


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GoldenCat 08-25-05 06:49 PM

garbage you suck at rap go sucide twice

Kawn Flixx 08-25-05 07:40 PM

Drop a link or this will be closed

Moved

X-tortion 08-25-05 09:34 PM

You had a good flow & rhyme scheme to it..but it seems better if used for the chorus of a song..wasn't really complex or creative in my opinion as a verse..I give ya credit for tryin to improve..so keep doin what you do

Payn 08-25-05 11:26 PM

it was str8 & good 4 a freestyle fa sho but yeah drop dat link b4 diz is closed up


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