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Murkz vs .Mystique.
Battle Rules:
10 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting iight homeboy Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-25-05 at 10:25 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Murkz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-05 07:30 PM.
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Listen,
Murkz is Nice ,this picture gettin clearer Mistique ,girl or boy that just made the battle get weirda fuck it this nigga half bitch,half man like they said about Ciara Im out here dealin wit this low level mut This cat is "Mist" i turned the Knotch on the water hose im 1 level up This fly weight is is true so who u tryin ta dis I dont even know how u ka come hard If u sprayin wit "Mist" No wins in a wile, I aint eatin, they tryin to starve me In this battle im th driver, So wit a name like Mystique get off the "R.V." Me i cum 4 u I never stop lurkin Never stop workin Ima stay true to ya sig Murkz a never stop Murkin |
.Mystique. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-05 08:29 PM.
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Yo,
Another whack herb finding his way to rapverse.com, He ran away from home, quick! Someone phone his mom, Its funny how this ain’t jail but you’re my personal bitch, This guys homo, Get this whack the fuck up off my dick! With a record like that I leave ya Style oblique, Mystique spit his verse an left you bleak, Im finding it hard to keep ya teeth straight like an orthodontist, Spiting you medasin like I was ya blup~atonic Im done with this shit yo im sending you a good luck, You just dropped the soap in jail homie an just got fucked! *quick key * |
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Voted For: .Mystique.
my vote goes for Mystique cuz he actually got to this his his opponent and Murks try to get to it but didnt make sense!!...InfiniteStan |
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Voted For: .Mystique.
iight mayne heres how it goes.... mist had better punches and cooler wordplays...his verse was much more crative and vocab was quite balanced.. Another whack herb finding his way to rapverse.com, He ran away from home, quick! Someone phone his mom, ^^ thant was a weak opener there...but as u were keyin..i'ld say u r justifyed... Its funny how this ain’t jail but you’re my personal bitch, This guys homo, Get this whack the fuck up off my dick! ^firstline was rollin well...till ^^^^^^^ here...but u had a nice punch there...and atleast the line had a gd flow Im finding it hard to keep ya teeth straight like an orthodontist, Spiting you medasin like I was ya blup~atonic ^this was quite funny mayne...but if only u had counted the syllabs well..it would've had a better flow.. well u were keyin so i'ld say nice try cos at least u werent as repeatitive as ur opponent...he kept on talkin about ur name...murkz...you should have xpanded ur immagery...ur creativity cos you cant be hittin on ur opponent only thru their name..makes ur verse too monotonous..and you verse didnt have a gd structure...it didnt flow at all..check this Me i cum 4 u I never stop lurkin Never stop workin Ima stay true to ya sig Murkz a never stop Murkin ^ìthat was a 2/10...it didnt flow...dont jump to another line when they aint off the same length...it makes the flow fucked up...and makes u seem elemetry...if you had stayed constant like ur opener Murkz is Nice ,this picture gettin clearer Mistique ,girl or boy that just made the battle get weirda ^^^ you would have had a point on flow's... dont get mad dawg...but elevate... hit up one of my battles with honest and well xplained votes cos i did the same on here...thanx |
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Voted For: .Mystique.
Yo, Another whack herb finding his way to rapverse.com, He ran away from home, quick! Someone phone his mom, aight opener Its funny how this ain’t jail but you’re my personal bitch, This guys homo, Get this whack the fuck up off my dick! bit simple but ok With a record like that I leave ya Style oblique, Mystique spit his verse an left you bleak, lol aight personal Im finding it hard to keep ya teeth straight like an orthodontist, Spiting you medasin like I was ya blup~atonic lol good punch connected Im done with this shit yo im sending you a good luck, You just dropped the soap in jail homie an just got fucked! aight closer you seemed to have started wors n got betta but w/e you hit wid nice punches sometimes n had a overall better verse than his isten, Murkz is Nice ,this picture gettin clearer Mistique ,girl or boy that just made the battle get weirda meh...aight fuck it this nigga half bitch,half man like they said about Ciara Im out here dealin wit this low level mut wtf This cat is "Mist" i turned the Knotch on the water hose im 1 level up This fly weight is is true so who u tryin ta dis wtf...im confused I dont even know how u ka come hard If u sprayin wit "Mist" No wins in a wile, I aint eatin, they tryin to starve me w.e your wack In this battle im th driver, So wit a name like Mystique get off the "R.V." Me i cum 4 u I never stop lurkin Never stop workin Ima stay true to ya sig Murkz a never stop Murkin ok ......??? rofl elevate kid ya gotta work on punches an ya flow woz jus nazty vote mystique rtf here http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=205375 in the next 2 days or this vote will be removed |
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Voted For: .Mystique.
Ok... Murkz, I was feeling your verse, but you did not come as hard as she did. Your punches, personals, wordplay, and metaphors were all there, but IMO she just out-did you. You were not very consistent, and you came with a few played lines, which lost you some points. I KNOW that you can do better man, but you have just either been slacking off lately or underestimating your opponents, and that is something that you should never do. .Mystique., real nice verse from you ma. Haven't really seen much from you before, but you have talent. You came consistent with one creative punch after another, and they all connected. Had some good/funny wordplay in your verse as well (i.e. your closer, LMAO). Personals were there and they were hitting where it hurts. Overall, a good verse from you. V= .Mystique. |
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