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X-tortion 08-25-05 10:08 PM

Just Thinkin
 
Link:SL.Valentino- Little Tribute


Just thinkin if..1 of my broads'll linger spliffs..in my face
Convince me today..to purchase whiskey & blaze
Smellin pissy like waste..are local bums holding fifths
She attached to my arms..like I'm large golden gifts
Passin the projects..striking this nice ass the object
This task I accomplish..as midnight flash me honest
Roll up optimo's..fuck puffin on newports after sex
Collarbone with bite marks..so she's a master vet
Moving pass the checks..like no search from customs
Penetrate her..everything aches from belly button
To lower thigh..I'm only here just to show her life
Just thinkin if..I was drinkin with..cold ass ice
Without a lil fame..no other way to rekindle flames
It's simple & plain..to be in the middle of shame

Payn 08-26-05 11:22 AM

ight b honest wit ya it was ok but not as good as it could have been u need 2 expand ur vocab, structure was tha best thang bout it, throw sum meta's in tha mix 2 liven it up also but keep workin' at it continue 2 write & keep ya head up ~1~LUV~1~THUG~

rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206095


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