Drakel vs sabotage
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 200

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Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 03:44 PM.

quick key, get this over with

sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim
so im destroying his record, using his own name against him
shove a steak to ya, it aint rare, but you're getting well done
im not hittin up your cezar collab...but my hits will give you one
hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose
so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news
sab never turns on his game, he's stuck wondering how to pivot
shit, he always sees 'ell..........like a hateful british
this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop
the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops
zebra....screw what they say, ya can't buck up to me, aint part of the herd
text is bull, so mine's sweeping you quicker than computer nerds
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*real record is 21-21
*british don't really pronounce 'h's
*has a collab with cezar/seizure

uhmm, rest should be easy, don't get anything, dont vote......gl

Alright here you go. 12 Lines.

The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak
So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet"
All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something
Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping"
Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent
Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur)
Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors
Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada)
We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz
And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula)
Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads
I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread



straight keyed

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 05:14 PM.

Alright here you go. 12 Lines.

The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak
So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet"
All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something
Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping"
Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent
Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur)
Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors
Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada)
We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz
And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula)
Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads
I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread



straight keyed

lmlo......ahh well, good battle.....

i hope people understand the wordplay, for both verses skae

hell yeah. wel at least you put it to at least 200 votes.

Voted For: Drakel

The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak
So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet"
^^these kinda lines..defeat/da-feet are played..3/10
All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something
Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping"
^^^umm....decent i guess??...5/10
Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent
Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur)
^^basic rip on avatar...but still a personal i guess..5/10
Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors
Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada)
^^Weak becuz I think..... he wanted to spell it backwards..3/10
We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz
And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula)
^^drakel-uh?..drac-u-la...it has to match sllyable for sllyable..n u missed the 'U'..so this is forced wordplay....plus the 1st line the cuz shit was a forced rhyme....2/10
Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads
I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread
^^I like this bar.....6/10

Punches lacked.You had played shit...like the defeat/de-feet one.Then there was shit that was basic..like the avatar rip one.You gotta get creative with your shit more.And that backwards one..you just stated it...and I think that drakel meant to spell it like that.But the worst line was the drakel-uh/dracula one.It was a forced rhyme with the cuz/uh one and it was forced wordplay.Get your shit together dawg.

sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim
so im destroying his record, using his own name against him
^^wasn't feelin this one....4/10
shove a steak to ya, it aint rare, but you're getting well done
im not hittin up your cezar collab...but my hits will give you one
^^good...7/10
hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose
so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news
^^noose/news?....these are similar sounding words..but with a wordplay like this..you need homophones..so this was forced....3/10
sab never turns on his game, he's stuck wondering how to pivot
shit, he always sees 'ell..........like a hateful british
^^Good..creative and hard hittin...8/10
this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop
the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops
^^good personal wordplay...7/10
zebra....screw what they say, ya can't buck up to me, aint part of the herd
text is bull, so mine's sweeping you quicker than computer nerds
^^NAh....3/10

OK..a good verse tho it still had it's faults.Some punches..well..str8 up..were weak.Like the nerd one.But the biggest problem was probably the noose/news one.You can't make wordplay like that using words that sound "similar'.It has to be str8 homophones.But I think you got this easy for the 21 line/british e'll..and the other personals.

Vote-Drakel
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The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak
So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet"
Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads
I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread

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sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim
so im destroying his record, using his own name against him
hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose
so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news
this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop
the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops

word, upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin