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InfiniteStan vs .Mystique.
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines Honest crew votes No feeding No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-27-05 at 08:21 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. DQ'ed for PMing for votes: Quote:
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InfiniteStan has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-05 07:56 PM.
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This kid is the reason other rappers are climbing up top/
he sucks so bad that his fav' positions is a blowjob// every cat battles u and takes a pice of u // Mystique is the reason y theres lame cats running around with a crew//.. Today is a different day cuz' INFINITE STAN just arrived// 1.2.3. ready or not here i come fake ass kid better hide/ its time to get my fellas to take over this world// and fuck it! mights as well just take your girl// im runing every dip shit over// its a new generation, and infinitestan is gonn make it a game over// |
.Mystique. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-05 08:19 PM.
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*Quick key *
Now, look at my lyrics case~in~point, then say grace~when~I~appoint You say you can~diss like “Canibus“, well god damn~bitch, I can’t taste~ya~joint Get with fact’s, Knife an gun at head point, While stan waves the white flag, ……………Wugga ass bitch wearing fitted hats an du rags, your verse couldn’t be toxic if I labeled you as a biohazard, Never think you can out beat me you fucking bastard, I’ll dismantle ya verse into two an leave you bleek, Make you quit rap ,leave ya style oblique, Get on Ya knees bitch an bow to the king Now blow me bitch Before I toss ya ass out the ring, |
UPPIN VOTES!!!-
.......................... INFINITESTAN Vs. MYSTIQUE |
This was feedback posted for .Mystique.
checkin pollz nice drop fam.........................
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Voted For: .Mystique.
infinite - you have fixed your structure from last battle, but your punches are still pretty weak, you need to get more personal and use better wordplay and more complexer vocab. ok verse though. mystique - you dropped pretty decent, good flow and good punches throughout. ur structure came out a little weird but tis cool. as i keep saying use betetr vocab more complexer. use harder wordplay too. you came harder than him. v/mystique reasons above. |
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Voted For: .Mystique.
honestly had a hard time catching both flows; these verses would probably sound better than they look. basic voc. from both of u means this came down to punches. Mystique obviously had stronger punches, but both of u could have done better..... |
This was feedback posted for InfiniteStan
u need more punches to act with ur wurd play...get rid of the slashes as well....make ur structe organized too
4/10 |
*edit*
Voted for Mistique infinite u need more punches to act with ur wurd play...get rid of the slashes as well....make ur structe organized too 4/10 M.. u had an alright erse..ive seen bettah from u...keep ur wurd play alive..and wurk on ya structure...needs elevation..nice punches...keep it up |
Voted For: .Mystique.
Mystique's breakdown! Now, look at my lyrics case~in~point, then say grace~when~I~appoint You say you can~diss like “Canibus“, well god damn~bitch, I can’t taste~ya~joint I like that opener!...structure was off the meter,Nice!Punch hit nice too,good wordplay!9/10 Get with fact’s, Knife an gun at head point, While stan waves the white flag, ……………Wugga ass bitch wearing fitted hats an du rags, Weak punch,Didnt get it at all......1/10 :huh: your verse couldn’t be toxic if I labeled you as a biohazard, Never think you can out beat me you fucking bastard, Okay at best...you sorta throw'd a played punch an it was too simple!3/10 I’ll dismantle ya verse into two an leave you bleek, Make you quit rap ,leave ya style oblique, str8...punch was effective an easy too understand,but simple again!5/10 Get on Ya knees bitch an bow to the king Now blow me bitch Before I toss ya ass out the ring, Whoa!..sorta gay..I hope ur a female!...weak closer,but effective at least!3/10 InfiniteStan break down! This kid is the reason other rappers are climbing up top/ he sucks so bad that his fav' positions is a blowjob// Weak opener,Played as well...didnt rhyme,etc......0/10 :nono: every cat battles u and takes a pice of u // Mystique is the reason y theres lame cats running around with a crew//.. Sorta like a personal,but didnt connect at all,but it rhymed,Hah!..2/10 Today is a different day cuz' INFINITE STAN just arrived// 1.2.3. ready or not here i come fake ass kid better hide/ Weak...that wasnt a punch that was self glory...again 2/10 its time to get my fellas to take over this world// and fuck it! mights as well just take your girl// Why am I even breakin this verse down...Silly at best,but it was non-sense it wasnt even a punch more like a statement...1/10 im runing every dip shit over// its a new generation, and infinitestan is gonn make it a game over// Closer was played as tha last few punches you thrown,It was self glory..1/10 :huh: No hate just elevate,Str8 up an down! Quote:
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