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Intermental vs InfiniteStan
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6 - 8Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-28-05 at 02:29 PM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
Intermental has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-05 09:50 PM.
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InfiniteStan has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-05 09:51 PM.
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Bullets Burst-Precision, Cant ‘See Me’ I ‘Hurt-Ya-Vision’
And They Will No Doubt ‘Cut Off The Stan’ Like A ‘Circumcision’!! The Knife-To-Ya-Chest, Swipe-N-Ya-Breath, Put This Dike-To-His-Rest Much ‘Respect To BIG’, But This Time There Is No ‘Life-After-Death’!! il incision~lyrics, beat u in “text” and add sum “visions~with it”/ like how im quick to walk through “STAN'S barz like “prison~visits”// like “jigsaw puzzles” ur rhyming is “outa place” so INTER shud make a note/ to use more multis…coz u cudnt hit a “flow” if u fell out a “boat”// |
you sound like a bitch with the biggest discrace//
callin me out, im about to put chu in your own place// Intermental should switch his ass into heavy metal// its getting personal , your about to be disabled// dont ever think u could come in my thread & insult me// listen up and take a note of my new key/can u see me// imma beat chu and put chur ass in FEDEX// im wasting time chatting, especially my cre-DEETS//... IM WASTING MY TIME ON U BOI!!! |
OMG LMAO, sorry man that was shit.........................eazy win
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Yo, this is mean to say: like “jigsaw puzzles” ur rhyming is “outa place” so INFINITE shud make a note/ to use more multis…coz u cudnt hit a “flow” if u fell out a “boat”// Sorry but messed that bit up......ahh well |
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Voted For: Intermental
okay lets see......... inter:u got nice flow,but ur punches didnt hit that hard, u got couple nice personals and quality was gd.... Bullets Burst-Precision, Cant ‘See Me’ I ‘Hurt-Ya-Vision’ And They Will No Doubt ‘Cut Off The Stan’ Like A ‘Circumcision’!! nice opener...could be still harder but gd The Knife-To-Ya-Chest, Swipe-N-Ya-Breath, Put This Dike-To-His-Rest Much ‘Respect To BIG’, But This Time There Is No ‘Life-After-Death’!! lol..that second line was dope.......nice il incision~lyrics, beat u in “text” and add sum “visions~with it”/ like how im quick to walk through “STAN'S barz like “prison~visits”// 2nd line is gd...not best 1 like “jigsaw puzzles” ur rhyming is “outa place” so INTER shud make a note/ to use more multis…coz u cudnt hit a “flow” if u fell out a “boat”// lol...nice closer....... 7/10 stan: ur elevated man..u camed lot more harder than with me, but u could still elevate with flow and personal...u really havent any personals..... you sound like a bitch with the biggest discrace// callin me out, im about to put chu in your own place// ...hmm....what is this about...put u in your own place...first was ok..second..nah Intermental should switch his ass into heavy metal// its getting personal , your about to be disabled// this was maybe ur best punch.....nice dont ever think u could come in my thread & insult me// listen up and take a note of my new key/can u see me// ....this wasnt as gd............ imma beat chu and put chur ass in FEDEX// im wasting time chatting, especially my cre-DEETS//... ok closer... sorry to vote against u stan but..he camed harder..keep elevating...no hate |
This was feedback posted for Intermental
Intermental Took This LOL I Don't Need To Discuss This Man You Already Know!!!!!!
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Lmao yo dawg I know......ahaaha........................
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Voted For: Intermental
Bullets Burst-Precision, Cant ‘See Me’ I ‘Hurt-Ya-Vision’ And They Will No Doubt ‘Cut Off The Stan’ Like A ‘Circumcision’!! rofl nice opener 4/5 The Knife-To-Ya-Chest, Swipe-N-Ya-Breath, Put This Dike-To-His-Rest Much ‘Respect To BIG’, But This Time There Is No ‘Life-After-Death’!! lol nice use of multis 3.5/5 il incision~lyrics, beat u in “text” and add sum “visions~with it”/ like how im quick to walk through “STAN'S barz like “prison~visits”// lol nice punch connected well like “jigsaw puzzles” ur rhyming is “outa place” so INTER shud make a note/ to use more multis…coz u cudnt hit a “flow” if u fell out a “boat”// lol nice closer straight up battle verse i see nice use of multis nice flow good punches attempt at personals good verse you sound like a bitch with the biggest discrace// callin me out, im about to put chu in your own place// worded badly needs work but ok Intermental should switch his ass into heavy metal// its getting personal , your about to be disabled// nah dnt rhyme dont ever think u could come in my thread & insult me// listen up and take a note of my new key/can u see me// used same thing 2wice but w/e imma beat chu and put chur ass in FEDEX// im wasting time chatting, especially my cre-DEETS//... nah dont work but w/e oyu look like you need elevation but ok for a n00b good try work on ya punches flow was aight |
Voted For: Intermental
Ok...this was clearly one sided...However, neither MC came as hard as he could the first cat had very simple lines with nary a punch Inter had complex rhymes with set ups...now, even though the punches weren't knockout caliber, it was definitely more impressive than what the first cat spit if I had to break this down flow: inter rhyme: inter punches: inter basically, intermental took this because his verse was more complex and hard hitting Vote: Inter |
Voted For: Intermental
InfiniteStan you sound like a bitch with the biggest discrace// callin me out, im about to put chu in your own place// ^uhm, nothing creative in here, no real punch 4/10 Intermental should switch his ass into heavy metal// its getting personal , your about to be disabled// ^that didn't rhyme...and uhm again no hardhitting punch 3/10 dont ever think u could come in my thread & insult me// listen up and take a note of my new key/can u see me// ^no punch whatsoever 0/10 imma beat chu and put chur ass in FEDEX// im wasting time chatting, especially my cre-DEETS//... ^aight, that was decent 5/10 Total: 12/40 = 30%, work on your punches, your rhyming words, your vocab... Intermental Bullets Burst-Precision, Cant ‘See Me’ I ‘Hurt-Ya-Vision’ And They Will No Doubt ‘Cut Off The Stan’ Like A ‘Circumcision’!! ^aight opener, decent punch, good wordplay 7/10 The Knife-To-Ya-Chest, Swipe-N-Ya-Breath, Put This Dike-To-His-Rest Much ‘Respect To BIG’, But This Time There Is No ‘Life-After-Death’!! ^nice shit right here, good wordplay once again 7/10 il incision~lyrics, beat u in “text” and add sum “visions~with it”/ like how im quick to walk through “STAN'S barz like “prison~visits”// ^staying consistent with wordplay forming it into punch 7/10 like “jigsaw puzzles” ur rhyming is “outa place” so INTER shud make a note/ to use more multis…coz u cudnt hit a “flow” if u fell out a “boat”// ^nice wordplay once again, closed it damn well 8/10 Total: 29/40 = 72%, solid battle verse |
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