THE NAME vs poisenous_tongue
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-28-05 at 08:29 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed.. went over line limit of 6 lines

THE NAME has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 07:33 AM.

no any idea to battle with u, are u boy or bitch,so im respective,
I don’t hit u hard bitch, take this like from womans perspective,
his mom of all wack rappers momma teresa 2, I saw her address,
im fat spitta and born new generation,but u just take the parents test.
u got poisonous-tongue, is that for ur brains are radio-active,
ur most harders emcee iv ever met,or im just too sarcastic…

explanations
check this site:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206367

poisenous_tongue has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 07:56 AM.

How many times should I re-write my rhyme
Im battling for the first time
on the front line
I imagine that your dissing or perhaps your missing
the point is
I rap lyrics that will blow your mind
out of joint
you can assert
that Im a bitch
and perhaps a hoe
but in all that your lack of lyrical flow
will show

phat lyrics aint for weaklings
who claim that they are dope
with their metaphorical gunslinging
and fake bling blinging
I might be tone death
but you could hear me singing

don't be treating me like cattle
cos you've already lost the battle
if you done your homework you'll know about me
don't throw away your rattle yet
it's time to grow
just take it nice and slow

oh, the name - I told you you should have concentrated on the flow - Iam not great at this rap game. But you need to refresh. I guessed that you would try dissing - I assumed that you might try to use the fact that I am a woman against me. But obviously you did not look far enough through my threads. You just assumed that cos I am newb whatever the heck you thought.

If I was to up your lyric - I think you do have the beeffing aspect to your lyrics. This can make it easier for you under battle conditions. This is my biggest downfall.

Voted For: poisenous_tongue

WTF????
it says 6 lines not 15 dawg
This shit needs closing dawg!!!!

so sori that was mean to be feed im really sori .

yo some1 please change that vote............and yea pt u made about 15 lines...limit was 6

Was'nt it 6 lines minimum - we can always take away a few of my lines if you want. That is a compromise, don't you think?