-UNF- vs T-Hook
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T-Hook has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 01:38 PM.
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-UNF- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 01:50 PM.
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Ayo, Ya Twice Before.. Been TORN-AND-RAPED, So Mind YOUR-DAMN-FACE! Cuz -UNF- Be "Droppin Disciples" Like "Vice LORD-HAND-SHAKES"*!!// You'll Get'cha Brain & FACE-MAULED, Ass Fucked With BLADES-RAW, Grenades & CHAIN-SAWS! I'll Have You "Throwin In The Towel" Like "Proky BASE-BALL"!!!// BELIEVE-YA-ASS-IS-BASSIN' To Think You Next To Me Or EVEN-HALF-ADJACENT; Cuz The Only People Screamin "FUCK -UNF-!!" Is Successful REHAB-PATIENTS!!// You Know Me I Left ABUSED-IN-TIGHT-SPITS, You Tellin WHO-TO-BATTLE-BITCH?!? Shit, Even When You Hiding "Copyin Punchlines" This Kat Fails To CHOOSE-THE-"RIGHT-CLIQUE"!// Now You FOUND-DEFEAT, I'll Out RHYME-A-THOUSAND-TEAMS For POUNDS-OF-GREEN While This Kid Is Hiding... Only Seen "Flossin" Cuz He Can't Keep My "LINES-OUT-HIS-TEETH"*!!//... |
You Bitches are Chic Made,
i'm Quick with my fist in the switchblade, get brave, or get a clip in your ribcage, that's what'll happen u act dumb, silencers on the gat make it sound like a cap gun, i'm from where they bump heat, dudes that want beef, can smack with the 2 remove all there front teeth, it aint difficuilt, the pistol will cripple u, to see it clap, push your head back, like mystikal, u gotta earn ur respect, u gettin robbed get a job, and earn u a check, u heard that im nice, i spit the most obsurd issue u heard in ur life, hears a word of advice, that u shud listen to, if u get offended we probly dissin u, ive been blessed with a flow, spittin ever since, some say im conceded, nah im just convinced, im not tryin to be a hater, i say what i think, but i heard better punchlines at the prom waiting for drinks, i spit flames, leave you burning in hell, helpless in battle picture bow-wow smokin the L, im on fire so you know were smoking blunts, this aint chicken pox, no u can catch it more than once, |
w.e fool your whack you got potential but you need to elevate One. upping
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i drop the bomb like taliban
upping bitches |
nah...thats jus basic read ma shit check the punches n the wordplay then go over yours :/ u see yours needs elevation and mine dont..but i didnt really try against you so meh....
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This was feedback posted for -UNF-
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upp diggity,.......................................... .......
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Voted For: -UNF-
yo this is an iight battle but nuthin great...obliviously -UNF- got it cuz he had some nice punches...he took it easlily...nice verse t-hook but i gotta give it to unf...BELIEVE-YA-ASS-IS-BASSIN' To Think You Next To Me Or EVEN-HALF-ADJACENT; Cuz The Only People Screamin "FUCK -UNF-!!" Is Successful REHAB-PATIENTS!!//<that right there is what sealed tha deal in this shit right herr mayne...no hate t-hook...holla back at shya boy |
upping,........................................... ............
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Voted For: -UNF-
to be honest....this is kinda a one side vote....no hate though.. T hook....u had some decent punches but u need elevation in your game son...u used some kiddie words like...chicken pox...spittin...and dissin....i just didnt quite feel u get there....but if ya elevate ya game son...you'll proolly be good -unf-...good flow and structure...u kept with the flow and originality was d0pe...punches were very nice and also decent....vocab skills were great v/ -UNF- nice battle yo |
Voted For: -UNF-
i aint gunna give a decent vote coz hook didnt give a decent verse ..its as simple as that....... cancel this if you want mod's....but if you read the verse's you'll understand why!..... |
Voted For: -UNF-
T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot. Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse. T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot. Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse. T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot. Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse. T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot. Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse. Rtf below or this vote will be removed in 3 days :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206352 |
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