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BRO YAO 08-29-05 06:44 PM

Live My Life(audio)
 
LIVE MY LIFE
http://www.soundclick.com/artist/1/broyao_music.htm

tell me wassup with it,

here are da links
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206551
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206050
holla back

Ysdat 08-29-05 06:49 PM

playing.

beat should never used that beat.

Intro,is weird. your putting a huge change into your normal voice, try spitting your rhymes with your usual voice.dont fake anything.
(hope thats not your real voice)

Overall the track isnt good.

Young Montana 08-29-05 06:49 PM

:shocked: no beef yo ....buh keep practicing fa real....practice on everything... :thumbup: you cant even really hear wa chu sayin cus it sound like u mumblein, or wateva...and not on beat...sound like u just sayin shit, puttin words together,...stay up......... :thumbup:

Blay'all 08-29-05 07:12 PM

i really cant judge English hip-hop cuz even the famous ones sound just weird to me like their flow is off.. but i know its just cuz im not used to it....

but, like everybody else is saying i thought it sounded like u were trying to hard to sound a certain way, just flow yourself dont fake shit.. and yeah like Montana said it was hard to follow the verse..

.Ike. 08-29-05 08:55 PM

lol..................................

B.I.G. 08-29-05 09:13 PM

Beat waz aight but not along wit the voice, you scream too much I hardly could understand, but I figured that if you speak clearly the track will be good, keep practicin, no beef.. peace

BRO YAO 09-01-05 02:59 PM

yea i been hearin that like a muafucka, i guess ima tone down da anger on da next track

holla at me tho, if you got any advice or feedback

BRO YAO 09-02-05 05:57 PM

wassup yall, only make me get betta with cristism righ?
haha


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