Life Riddles
 

Life Riddles (A Gangsta's Life)

Very Deep Emotional Shit

www.soundclick.com/ax
don't worry, I don't have many tracks so it will be easy to find it, and this way you can see the lyrics too @ Lyrics/Story lol

plz lay ur thoughts


links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205660
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205660

Uppin..........
c'mon feed me with your knowledge

The quality was off, your accent is thick in a couple parts
it sounded like you was "mumble mumble mumble bitch"
like you forgot the words or something

Then you can tell you was reading
Memorize your verse next time, it'll help you put more emotions into it
cause you'll have the rythm and feel already down
Then it'll make doin adlibs easier

Turn your vocals up cause the beat drowned out other parts

I've heard worse
Perfect your delivery then worry about adlibs, the adlibs were a little much


5/10

aight, thank you... pc

not bad

your flow wasnt perfect
your addlibs SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME
You'll be spittin and it'll be like "WHYYY DIE MOTHERFUCKER"

I thought I was being cursed just from listenin to ya shit. lol

but yo, Imma tell you how to do ya addlibs
when you record your vocals, make sure that they are atleast, ATLEAST 2.5 db higher then the beat. and when you mix it, and edit them, make sure you dynamic process them as thumbass or w/e
when you do your addlibs, make SURE that they are atleast 1.5 LOWER then your vocals.
and when you dynamic process your adlibs, make sure you use..uber-punch.
that'll make it sound better.
now, to what you was actually sayin, I have no clue.
I DO know you were rappin though, and I didnt like your flow
its like what the other dude say mumble mumble muble BITCH!!!!
So work on that too.

Aight... thanx anyway.... lol

lol@me being a dude




-Storm

^^^^ what the holly fuck?

Iite my dawg peep this, work on yo flow, hit them beats good, dont mumble and that thing about ure adlibs will help drastically trust me, ok work, keep at it kid youll get it dawg.....rtf to my track "2 minutes left" its in tha sig wun