The Murderer's Theme; Featuring 2 of E-Style's Finest. no homo
 

Yes, me and my nigga Pop Lotty, we almost up.
hop on our dicks, no homo, pause, we had to put that nigga Spul on hold, fa real, but he up next, fa real.
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From Detroit to Jerz

The Murderer's Theme

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2406105

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206638

Ayo dude that was sick. specially the second guy.

nah, I kinda liked the 1st dude better.
props to both though

but the 1st dude was mos def. better

hot joint fam....yall worked that nas beat, good drop, get at me for a collab

yea, kryo sorry man for not bein' able to come thru. But y'all held shit down yo. Shabba keepin' it dope, and same kryo. Quality only thing but shit was still clear, and that's all that matters really. Overall y'all did this shit up nice. keep it up yo. e-style. pc

mmm beat is iight, never really liked it, first dudes quality is soso, nice flow tho, voice is okay, chorus is wack, second dude starts to late , voice is better, quality is better too, pretty good
overall not bad track

up, up, up.................

1st verse, your timing was off on a couple lines but you did your thing
next time though work on your timing
and back up from the mic, sounds like you had it in your mouth
either that or turn your vocals down

2nd Verse, dude took a minute to jump on the beat, lol
he killed it though when he finally jumped on it


good shit




-Storm

1st cat was o.k- bad pronounciation, put out the words better and it would have been good, just practice
2nd cat was real improved over last shit I heard from you, delivery was original, and well put together, couple stand out lines, real easy to listen to, just need to up the quality, cuz your vocals seemed a little low and slightly fuzzy, but it was a good track... xgj

listneing through some better than average speakers.

First verse, your mic is CRUSTY. As soon as you started recording I heard the static. The flow is lumpy, too fast some spots, on some others and too late on others. Some EQing would bring this shit out some but the mic is self is still in need of replacement immedately. The hook was off-flow hardcore.

Second verse, mic is ASS and it's a shame since your lyrics are fire. Sounds liek a jerz style. Thew only shortcoming (aside fomr the mic) was the delivery on the closer. Shoudla definitely added more cadence to it. Both yall need new mics, but the second dude needs it like immediately. as in, go rob someone and go buy a mic with the money. 1

nice shit good flow good beat wid nas beat......erm liked 1st dude better good quality


- Dont' think for a minute that this qualifies as actual feedback.


Dooms.

Up like hard dicks, no homo.

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