Satanic Chapters first try
 

2 links short of a post son.

gotta put it on lo fi or it dont work

thx al ot ima do the real song tommorow...so i tell u

u spittin kinda fast to understand,hot beat tho....from what i did hear the wordplay was hot....lemme get in this ish check me out @
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=170307

thx a lot im glad no ones annoyin me cause ma voice

Ok well I already told you what I thought. But anyway.

Back up from the mic. For real. Don't eat the damn mic. Your flow I thought was cool, but try to ride the beat a little more. Lyrics I thought were nice. Quality was horrible. That's the only word to describe it. Other than that everything else I thought was cool. Just work on your quality and back up from the mic.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206697
left feed there will post the other link later

upping........................................

for ya first its pretty decent mines was ass..beat is nice..with a lil more work on ya delivery you'll get there..just remember to be a rapper doesnt mean you have to rap fast ya feel?? just get comfy on the track and do what you feel is right for you....but other than that its a decent track just do some more.....im working my way up as well...i call it a lyrical excersice..i never make whole songs when its coming on the net its just for practice so make sure u practice recording alot of verses..that way when you get ready to do a whole song you'll be nice at it...cuz having a whole song and it not being good isnt coo..so just record verses and a chorus here and there...AND do some battleing that helps too

yea, you be cuffing the mic

or you got one of them cheap 5.99 joints and to close to it
the fast flow aint you and it really didn't match that beat


wasn't feeling this



keep elevating





-Storm

Either your a girls with a real soft voice or a young ass boy

Flow is off and seems forced, delivery is ok, presence is good
lyrics are ok, and the hook is ok and needs work

The beat is ok and a fruity loops knock off

there isnt as hook but aight thx for feed

Listen:
I dont like the beat at all.......flow was a bit of but the quality made it worse
delivery and presence were both good,lyrics were also very nice
But alot of workis needed but keep it up!!!!