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Hit em Up
Yeah, Lets Drop it....
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Yo this is pretty decent. You should get a mic and record it b/c it's kinda hard to see how each bar flows. But overall it's aiight some pretty good vocab. Im glad you're not trying to be like everyone else on the site tronna to use every big word in the world just to make your shit sound like its deep ...
You kept it simple,keep it up. |
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pretty good i liked it i dont kno if anyone else did but good job
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Eh At Rep Tracks
... The Flow Was Straight, But You Really Didnt Have Any Punches That Were To Good. Like Matic Said, Record This Shit ... It Would Be ALOT Better On Audio. The Flow Was Pretty Good Cuz You Used Short Lines ... But Ya, Next Time Try A Topic With Some Deph. I'm Interested To See How You'd Handle It. |
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