Thassarap vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 ko
4-1 ko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-30-05 at 07:00 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-05 06:10 PM.

Thassarap has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-05 06:20 PM.

Ur just a net thug, this is rap, u don’t stand a chance in a pen fight
And we all know ur name is Stanza cause it’s all that u can write
Every battles wack …...and yet you prevail cause of dickriders
The only way u could drop hot text is when mine sets urs on fire
U must be suicidal, cause battling against me is the way to sink
Once I’ve finished with ur crew, u’ll be leading Ghost Town Inc


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Explanations:
1st Bar: His diss to The Movement is only 11 lines
2nd bar: In case he pulls a bitch move and changes his user title, it was “.......And Yet I Prevail” when I posted this

Im Not gonna Change My User Title Thats a Bitch Move man lol

And Oh Yeah Your Gonna Lose and Ima TEll You Why

You Had to much self-glorification and the only good bar you had was the 2nd one and you really messed up the wordin on that one HONESTLY thats what the voters are gonna say

Watch But Goodluck anyway

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for Thassarap
 

checkin pollllllllz fam...........................

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Stanza

yo this was pretty thight...........

thassarap:
Ur just a net thug, this is rap, u don’t stand a chance in a pen fight
And we all know ur name is Stanza cause it’s all that u can write
...gd notvery hard but concept is gd...5/10
Every battles wack …...and yet you prevail cause of dickriders
The only way u could drop hot text is when mine sets urs on fire
this was maybe ur best bar....i liked it 8/10
U must be suicidal, cause battling against me is the way to sink
Once I’ve finished with ur crew, u’ll be leading Ghost Town Inc
gd closer.........smooth.....7/10

overal 20/30

stanza:
You Gets Torn.. Let Me Demonstrate, Limb For Limb You Being Tossed
Your Skills Are "Old Like Rotten Organs", ...Not Good Enough To "Rip Off"
nice opener.....i liked concept...flow and stucture are gd..8/10
Beat him to a yelp, ..this bitch Will be grieving And seeking-vital-Help
He’s the next level of wackness, which is only preceded-by-his-SELF
lol...nice.......7/10
we know what to expect with ya style, like when summer’s repeating
Your verse be having more "shitty concepts" than a "plumbers meeting"
nice closer.......8/10

overal 23/30

vote stanza......pretty gd battle,no hate

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Stanza

ok...Thassarap's verse i couldnt pick up on any flow ar all..and he hardly had any punchlines..if he did n i didnt pick up on them thats cause they was weak.

now stanza...ur verse had more vocab then the other mc..and some alright punchlines...u got my vote
v/stanza

Voted For: Stanza

Ur just a net thug, this is rap, u don’t stand a chance in a pen fight
And we all know ur name is Stanza cause it’s all that u can write
5...a personal..so good..but didn't connect well
Every battles wack …...and yet you prevail cause of dickriders
The only way u could drop hot text is when mine sets urs on fire
4....shoulda worded the set-up different n put it as punch...
U must be suicidal, cause battling against me is the way to sink
Once I’ve finished with ur crew, u’ll be leading Ghost Town Inc
5..well....decent I guess

You Gets Torn.. Let Me Demonstrate, Limb For Limb You Being Tossed
Your Skills Are "Old Like Rotten Organs", ...Not Good Enough To "Rip Off"
7.....set-up was relevant...punch hit..good
Beat him to a yelp, ..this bitch Will be grieving And seeking-vital-Help
He’s the next level of wackness, which is only preceded-by-his-SELF
4...ok this multi was forced...
we know what to expect with ya style, like when summer’s repeating
Your verse be having more "shitty concepts" than a "plumbers meeting"
5...played punch..

Ok..stanza got this..

Thass was too basic with his execution of punches.Got some ite concepts n all..but ya ain't doin it good enuff.Like...i see wat ya tryna do wit dat 1st bar n all..with the 11 lines diss he did..but the way da punch was layed out...didn't connect.And the rip on avatar..should of been the punch itself..not da set-up.

Vote-Stanza

Voted For: Stanza

Easy win for Stanza.

ok, good battle stanza.....
i could get that last vote removed, but i wont, cause u already got the KO...