Acoustic Beat(A Day In My Life)
 

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a day in my life

peep

took a sample from a dude lol dont remember his name

iite not great at judgin beats but here we go, likin this upbeat smooth country type intro, quite repetetive but here we go, likin this flow, ud need sum slow rappin here, maybe subject a hook in there with a different flow, sound dope, oh likin the pianos, this is pretty dope, sum nice beat to jus flow to ya knw 8/10

up...................

Lovin the guitar..maybe need a solid bass line in here...seems to just be on the same notes as the main melody...i like the chorus...the drum pattern is cool as well...

overall a nice beat..switch the bass line up a lil..i like it..it its hard..just switch it up a lil...nice beat right there...wun

rtf please..

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