"Hate On Me" - Intermental (Best Song Yet From Inter)
 

My best song yet...

www.soundclick.com/intermental

took a long time and id appreciate sum feedback..

its called "Hate On Me Now"

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206552
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206552

its nice i dont think its ya best personnally the flow is good heard it go off only like 3 times thru the whole song for a short period i like the lyrics nice the delivery is good i thought you dont the backing vocals a bit much n a few but its nice you should have put a lil more emotion into it overall good drop keep up

ok......thanks upin

beat:is ok...different kind.........
song is like hiphop...u know...not like raw rapping...like hip hop....but kinda cool,
ur quality is way more better....................and this is gd drop

lol thanks for the feed...but hiphop not rap???....lmao...im confused now...but thanks alot

upppin...........

Listenin:

Beat is nice i like it,but like The Name said its alot more hiphop and your quality is ALOT better,flow is nice too!!!:D

some of the l lines seemed forced

didn't like the echo ablibs

felt the beat and some of the lyrics

not bad

keep elevatin




-Storm

thanks...........

thanks alot..........

I liked the beat...

about your flow...ur flow will be on point for a few bars...then, it'd seem like you lost site of the beat...that's partially breath control, but the rest is simply writing lyrics that fit the beat...Listen to the flow, if it seems like you're off beat, re-write or re-spit a line


Lyrics: pretty decent in spots


This was a good attempt...u got heart dawg


But, I agree that this wasn't your best. I think the Dabatos track was your best.


good try though...keep elevating


ur making progress


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thanks i appreciate imm re-try at lyrics on this

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