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Daemon vs REDZONE
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-05-05 at 06:13 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
Daemon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-05 06:38 PM.
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During preschool, he scribbled with a crayon when we was supposed to have red...
His name shows he's on the "X"... must be why he thinks he's chased by "feds". Seriously though, man, just plug it, like with most bitches do with the Red Zone... R stole third plate while hunted by cops, just because he thought next he'd go home. Think you're a thug? Kid's like a box of duds, all he does is light up fucking doobies... We wouldn't believe you were stoned...if you were a motherfucking mine of rubies. Your eyes are really the red zone...you think you're cool because you smoke weed? But I guess it really makes you a lot dumber... because you think cheerios are donut seeds! |
REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-05 12:30 PM.
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once again, compeititon gotta a niggaz pussy wet...
oh no DAEMON!, ain't you tha faggot from Friday After Next... AK's hit tha flo', let tha crowd see you dance like puffy... you an off brand nigga, soft patch pussy like ya dog Fluffy... I'm convinced that (D)icks (A)lways (E)xcercise in ya (M)outh... (O)bviously lil (N)iggaz like you scared ta peak outside ya house... before I leave, in conclusion I'm wishin you good luck fool... but then tha G comes out wit a betta ending like nigga FUCK YOU... |
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o-O You know that using the name as the first letter of a bar is played as shit, right? Oh well, up.
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Voted For: Daemon
im gonna have to sya that you won becuase you had better bars, he had some ok shit but you where better RED: aight you where ok but needed alot better punches and personals, your structure was pretty decent and that lettter shit was decent but ive seen it so many times..... DAE:you had soem pretty good lines your closer hella made me laugh and you actually made bars, not just 2 lines that rhyme, you used your first line to set up for the punch in your second line which means your alot betyter than that guy........and that donut line is still making me luagh... vote = daemon PLEASE RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228 |
Voted For: Daemon
During preschool, he scribbled with a crayon when we was supposed to have red... His name shows he's on the "X"... must be why he thinks he's chased by "feds". 5....decent Seriously though, man, just plug it, like with most bitches do with the Red Zone... R stole third plate while hunted by cops, just because he thought next he'd go home. 4...ain't feelin this much...but..meh..ite Think you're a thug? Kid's like a box of duds, all he does is light up fucking doobies... We wouldn't believe you were stoned...if you were a motherfucking mine of rubies. 6...liked the 2nd line..but not the 1st Your eyes are really the red zone...you think you're cool because you smoke weed? But I guess it really makes you a lot dumber... because you think cheerios are donut seeds! 3......bad closer once again, compeititon gotta a niggaz pussy wet... oh no DAEMON!, ain't you tha faggot from Friday After Next... 3....NO...bad punch... AK's hit tha flo', let tha crowd see you dance like puffy... you an off brand nigga, soft patch pussy like ya dog Fluffy... 3....hated the set-up n punch was weak I'm convinced that (D)icks (A)lways (E)xcercise in ya (M)outh... (O)bviously lil (N)iggaz like you scared ta peak outside ya house... 7....good....keep flow n shit goin while still spellin his name.. before I leave, in conclusion I'm wishin you good luck fool... but then tha G comes out wit a betta ending like nigga FUCK YOU... 3....no Daemon got this battle. Redzone...aside from that bar where you spelled out his name..the rest was whack.That 1st bar....just a horrible concept.Daemon..fagoot from FridayAfterNext?C'mon.And that 2nd bar...set-up talkin about guns n shit..and a weak punch.Last bar was basic and weak. Vote-Daemon. rtf below in 3 days....or this vote will be removed :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909 |
I'll RTF. But removing votes are for fucking lowlife fags. I always vote and leave feed, do I go around saying 'i'll remove my feed if you don't rtf'. Nope.
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Voted For: Daemon
once again, compeititon gotta a niggaz pussy wet... oh no DAEMON!, ain't you tha faggot from Friday After Next... no not good didnt work AK's hit tha flo', let tha crowd see you dance like puffy... you an off brand nigga, soft patch pussy like ya dog Fluffy... lol funny good personal....... I'm convinced that (D)icks (A)lways (E)xcercise in ya (M)outh... (O)bviously lil (N)iggaz like you scared ta peak outside ya house.. nope its wos aight before I leave, in conclusion I'm wishin you good luck fool... but then tha G comes out wit a betta ending like nigga FUCK YOU... aight closer During preschool, he scribbled with a crayon when we was supposed to have red... His name shows he's on the "X"... must be why he thinks he's chased by "feds". aight opener Seriously though, man, just plug it, like with most bitches do with the Red Zone... R stole third plate while hunted by cops, just because he thought next he'd go home. rofl good personal Think you're a thug? Kid's like a box of duds, all he does is light up fucking doobies... We wouldn't believe you were stoned...if you were a motherfucking mine of rubies. nice punch Your eyes are really the red zone...you think you're cool because you smoke weed? But I guess it really makes you a lot dumber... :huh: aight you both need work but deamon straight took this with more punches and better wordplay |
This was feedback posted for Daemon
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3-0 KO my sistah and/or daughtered brother dad....
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