Bobby Valentino Ft. Vendetta - Tell Me (Remix)
 

i'm back on rv posting tracks...i ain't here to beef with nobody...just want feed for my tracks and that's it...whether the feed is good or bad...if u hate me or w/e then don't come in here saying it's bad just to say it's bad but anyways...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204411
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206910
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207116

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/3/...nario_music.htm

enjoy :thumbup:

first off which one is u I heard two differnt cats and none of them was bobby either?

obviously both of em are me

lmao...hold on...i named em the wrong titles

now try it fam...lol

I think that you should change the name of the song, you sound like senser lol...it's iight nice lyrics good flow nice choice of beat, at one part you have a deep voice and then you have a kid voice tone.............it's iight like i said but the name of the song doesnt go wit the song and lyrics.

i just told u i had the names mixed up...lmao...anways thanks...yea i'm still learning how to use one voice tone the whole time...thanks for the feedback though

yo fam my bad again...both of em were the same songs...i'm uploading "Tell Me" right now...please listen again...lmao...sorry for all the freeposting mods...outspoken...what u heard was "Robbin And Theaving Pt.2"...that's me and 20 Grand...20 Grand sounds like Senser...i'm the "kid voice"...lmao

weerd
nice flow
your delivery needs a bit of work though
i think you shouldve stressed your rhymes more though
it seems that you like cut straight into the next line, kinda like you cramming two and two together...
i guess it might effect your flow a bit, but in the long run i think itd sound a bit better...
lyrics is nice though
overall good stuff, was feeling it

good track deb flow was good lyrics were there delivery was aiight back to droppin again huh? good track keep droppin =1=....

Good shit. beat is sick.

Flow was good, and delivery was OK.

Your voice suits the style you delivered with, the low, not much emotion style kind of like 50 cent has. Its not a bad style and it goes well with your dope lyrics. But you need a bit more emotion.

thanks for the feedback peeps...uppin for more feedback

iite listenin as type.......

youre flow is good here, lyrics are pretty good....iite next bit..flow is pretty consistent here too, gd lyrics, maybe more better delivery....7/10 keep up

What in the world were you thinking lol, lil'Wayne already did the remix lol that's fucking hularious, your quality is a little shaky but I'll look past that. I like the flow it's generic now though, nice ending to the first verse....aah man I thought it was gonna change this kinda songs been done a million times over I don't see why people seem to be doing it again and again. I'd give it a 7/10

o shit i remember u ..was wonderin what happened to ya lol any who nice idea..nice track feelin it ..cant say im lovin urs better than lil waynes version but i am almost lol.u got nice flow/delivery. Quality needs to be a TINY bit better just a lil bit better to be subperb..not bad at all nigga..get at me on aim sometime.