Affliction vs criminal
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-03-05 at 02:37 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Affliction has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-05 01:56 PM.

criminal has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-05 02:08 PM.

Yo criminal might be throwing punches but he aint hittin nothing
Go back to your name, so you become a sayain and get pumping
If you had any Senses you should've known this lost was comin
You could put ! at the end of your lines and still
..............................................Your punches wouldn't be frighten
Man I thought you was rolling nice until you lost to a dude name daubs
You couldn't be viciously nice even if you have mouth full of soapy suds
You could do an 180 and still wouldn't have no chance to turn this around
But you is helpless Like an Puppy that's been lost and never will be found
Time to end this now
.............................Kid your lower than homeless kids on the streets
The only time you hitting hard is putting your fist on the concrete

*His old name was "Vaita4"

stop that, u 2-3 and expect to beat me?..pause
haha... i laugh so hard i pissed out blood like minapuse

look i put men to crawl, u need 10 men to ball
and like broken starters, ya flow expected to stoll

this murder sceen like O.j hoping out the branco
u spit fire?, not even after a bag full of lit charcoal

so kid just fall-back or get lent like the eiffel-tower
cause you're flow will still stink if u took 9-in-a-row-shower

like psyschic-readers with explosives this verse i'll blow ya mind
cuz you getting beat around the clock like you got drop and rolled ova-time

something quick freestyle

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Voted For: Affliction

Structure-Both had poor structure........couldnt create a flow on either, this is a problem simply becuz then the punches arent as effective in the readers mind.

Vocab-Gutta give this one to criminal, he had the only real vocab in his verse mina puse......lol both enhance ur vocab so its presented well in ur verse next time

Multis-Niether had any multis so i simply cant vote on this catergorie................

Personals-Affliction had the more afflicting persnoals lol....criminal had some personals but afliction took it away, this catergorie-afflfiction

Punches-Plain to see who hAd the harder hitting punches, Criminals punches were harder hitting and far more creative, this is consistant for him.......this catergorie-criminal

Originality-Affliction had the more fresh verse...stood out more, his verse caught my eye and was presented better than criminals.....

v/affliction

rtf in 3 days on my sig links or this vote will be dq'd

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Lol @ Banned for Biting...damn...Oh well I'll tell strobe to give me my win...word.