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WhoAmI 09-03-05 02:01 PM

Quit Whining (Criminal "Diss")
 
Look niggette

i ain't wastin more than eight lines on you.....

You're wack you're lame, played rhymes are your only claim to fame
K-Trin was first suspected wackest, now you're in the frame
Dopey nigga do you really think i'd run from you :huh:
That shit's a joke like one of Coolio's cheques clearing through*
Nerve to call ME a rookie my nigga now you ain't exactly a vet
I didn't check in, now you're cryin as if i killed your family pet
OK it happened like twice but what can i say?....my bad!!!
But stop complainin or is it time to change your Maxi Pad?**

*cos he broke
**that time of the month obviously

PrahJect 09-03-05 02:22 PM

Lol this was better then the other niggas diss.....this wasnt even that special but kiled him off an instant i guess this was like a 1 min diss thing still beat him lol..neways 7.5/10

criminal 09-03-05 02:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by RawFlowz
Look niggette

i ain't wastin more than eight lines on you.....

You're wack you're lame, played rhymes are your only claim to fame
K-Trin was first suspected wackest, now you're in the frame
Dopey nigga do you really think i'd run from you :huh:
That shit's a joke like one of Coolio's cheques clearing through*
Nerve to call ME a rookie my nigga now you ain't exactly a vet
I didn't check in, now you're cryin as if i killed your family pet
OK it happened like twice but what can i say?....my bad!!!
But stop complainin or is it time to change your Maxi Pad?**

*cos he broke
**that time of the month obviously


LMFAO this was weak
i will have my next diss done in 10 min that will shut him down for good

.Barz Of Steel. 09-03-05 03:43 PM

I cant even decide who came better...

Come on man

criminal 09-03-05 04:13 PM

peep my last drop to this bitch

its called its a WRAP cause honestly it really is after u read it,
if this was a battle it would be a TKO that when i say that verse for ITS A WRAP IS FIRE believe me or ya money back

WhoAmI 09-04-05 07:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Barz Of Steel.
I cant even decide who came better...

Come on man


but why waste a decent 8 lines on this kid???

criminal 09-04-05 10:51 PM

^^ u have no decent line ya verse who you really disrectping
not even ya house line connect, better switch you LAN(me) like dail-up connection

WhoAmI 09-05-05 06:47 PM

^^^now i know for a fact i've already seen a line wid the punch being about dial up connection

Busted nigga

criminal 09-05-05 08:29 PM

u have no proof,
and no i didnt bit

sorry to burst ya bubble

Crazy Hades 09-05-05 09:21 PM

Wow. A punch about a dial-up connection? That's as silly as there being different punches talking about de-feet.

criminal 09-05-05 10:23 PM

yea the concept is almost as played-out as ya skill's

Kawn Flixx 09-08-05 01:19 AM

Wow this was really weak... elevate homies.. alot .. learn to make personals off the information giving in the persons profile..sig... avy.. name .. record.. Etc. make hard punchlines.. and just try to get your thought across..

Pz.


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