9Days Wonder vs Carlos
 

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No Crew Votes
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-04-05 at 04:33 PM

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9Days Wonder has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-05 03:34 PM.

Carlos has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-05 03:41 PM.

Kick him in his face let em feel 'de-feet', he aint gon deal wit me,
Dis kid must be a 'penny pincher'...the way he's 'feelin cheap'

I laugh ya off, throw a 'stage' at this nigga now he's havin 'props',
Son I should buy 'comedy shares', cuz you a laughin 'stock',

When this battle is over, run away and don't linger,
I can help u out, fuck the hand, I'll just lend you two two fingers.

upping............ese ure verse was meh a lil basic

You need to include some personals bro. good luck............

Voted For: Carlos

Carlos wins this by a long shot had better punches abd better personals, structure was much better, so carlos gets this vote

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Structure? are you serious? im sorry but i cant let that vote stand.

This was feedback posted for Carlos
 

pollz............................................. .....

upppin for my boi carlos...........................

Voted For: Carlos

okay lets see.......

9days

First name to last place, nothing special about you,
You ain't a soldier man, just a no one wondering what to do.
what....wording is ok but i cant see a punch really..this was weak.....3/10
Rain on ya lyrics and nothing gonna happen, ya need a wet suit,
Only time ya sound good, is when you are put on mute.
...first line was gd...second was played 5/10
"Car los" in the movement, like traffic going away from katrina,
Only way you could crush someone is if they were thumbelina.
lol...this was nice.....i liked...but could be hared 8/10
Carlos gonna beat me? Come on man that's just absurd,
And ya movement is going well, cuz ya'll are moving backward.
second line was ok...first nah...... 6/10

22/40

carlos

Kick him in his face let em feel 'de-feet', he aint gon deal wit me,
Dis kid must be a 'penny pincher'...the way he's 'feelin cheap'
nice man...but sound kindaforced..but nice creativity 8/10
I laugh ya off, throw a 'stage' at this nigga now he's havin 'props',
Son I should buy 'comedy shares', cuz you a laughin 'stock',
nice.......nice.............7/10
When this battle is over, run away and don't linger,
I can help u out, fuck the hand, I'll just lend you two two fingers.
ok closer..............not bad 6/10

21/30

nice battle.....but i give this for carlos

Voted For: Carlos

Carlos-structured was off on the last line, besides that not too bad...nice wordplay..punches were alright, could of came harder

9 Days Wonder-Structure was on through the whole thing....no wordplay...punches were kinda weak, you need to elevate some

V-Carlos for comin harder

aiyo carlos got this one easy, yo 9 days wonder work a lil bit on ure punches and ure good

Voted For: 9Days Wonder

yo i like tha wordplay of carlos but i love tha punches by 9dayswonder...thatz y im given this vote to 9days...tha structure was pretty nice too but tha punches are wut got my vote...it was basically all there...stricture flow and punches...v/9dayswonder...fo real...no hate carlos