Shazz vs .:YouNg.MiC:.
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Shazz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-05 10:46 PM.
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.:YouNg.MiC:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-05 10:04 PM.
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Kid u Gon Get Ripped-appart, is it all Clear like Crystal-Right?//
Never mind Kid so Retarted He Couldn't Tell da Difference Between his Left-n-Right, Yet still he Think he gon be da Winner on this// Da winners name Starts with a Y an Ends with a C on this Spit, Give it up kid an i Don't mean it in a Wrong Way so don't Get it Twisted like a Rain-Bow// I Spit so Much in All Different Directions might as well Call him my "Stained-Hoe", Let Go u Ain't gonna Win, Truly u Ain't number 1// 50 dat's your Number or Should i Say Number 101, Still u can't see this kid a fake,Like a Golden Tooth in a Mouth Placed// See as I Replace his Rhymes like Cavities waitin to be Filled-up With Feelings(Fillings)...Did i Hurt em Yet? |
Damn took you so long... Ill spit first bitch
___________________________________________ Took you so long to reply to my thread like you were D/R This is the internet ...can’t turn this into physically fighting You don’t understand this to new to the game Young Mic Im the ~G~ …you the kid wanting to suck some guys dick "Ain't Need 2 Know Who I Am"(your sig) who is this T.I. Who you think you are,im still sittin here waiting for a reply And if I'm…….. holdin a weapon you better get off me slut Because I'll smash yah mug…….. like breakin a coffee cup ___________________________________________ (typed in 4 min. or less) |
up?...... damn mine came from the top of the brain...
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Voted For: Shazz
Took you so long to reply to my thread like you were D/R This is the internet ...can’t turn this into physically fighting 3...didn't rhyme and was kinda weak as a punch You don’t understand this to new to the game Young Mic Im the ~G~ …you the kid wanting to suck some guys dick 4....ok punch..but gay is played out now "Ain't Need 2 Know Who I Am"(your sig) who is this T.I. Who you think you are,im still sittin here waiting for a reply 5...good..liked the 1st line.. And if I'm…….. holdin a weapon you better get off me slut Because I'll smash yah mug…….. like breakin a coffee cup 4...ok... Kid u Gon Get Ripped-appart, is it all Clear like Crystal-Right?// Never mind Kid so Retarted He Couldn't Tell da Difference Between his Left-n-Right, 2...elementary diss...i mean..couldn't tell differnce between left n right?..wtf? Yet still he Think he gon be da Winner on this// Da winners name Starts with a Y an Ends with a C on this Spit, 3...SG...not much of a punch Give it up kid an i Don't mean it in a Wrong Way so don't Get it Twisted like a Rain-Bow// I Spit so Much in All Different Directions might as well Call him my "Stained-Hoe", 3...Sg again... Let Go u Ain't gonna Win, Truly u Ain't number 1// 50 dat's your Number or Should i Say Number 101, 3...rhymes 1 with 1 and weak punch Still u can't see this kid a fake,Like a Golden Tooth in a Mouth Placed// See as I Replace his Rhymes like Cavities waitin to be Filled-up With Feelings(Fillings)...Did i Hurt em Yet? 5...finnaly a decent bar Ok..SHazz got this to me. YM..first thing you gotta do is fix up your structure.Don't put this(//) at the end of ur shit.And get some better punches.I mean..couldn't tell differnce between left n right?WTF is that?I heard someone say that to someone else in elementary skool.And you wanna use it in a battle?Nah.Can't do that shit.Only decent bar was the last one. Vote-Shazz |
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Voted For: Shazz
Shazz ----------- Took you so long to reply to my thread like you were D/R This is the internet ...can’t turn this into physically fighting You don’t understand this to new to the game Young Mic Im the ~G~ …you the kid wanting to suck some guys dick "Ain't Need 2 Know Who I Am"(your sig) who is this T.I. Who you think you are,im still sittin here waiting for a reply And if I'm…….. holdin a weapon you better get off me slut Because I'll smash yah mug…….. like breakin a coffee cup -------- .:YouNg.MiC:. --------------- Kid u Gon Get Ripped-appart, is it all Clear like Crystal-Right?// Never mind Kid so Retarted He Couldn't Tell da Difference Between his Left-n-Right, Yet still he Think he gon be da Winner on this// Da winners name Starts with a Y an Ends with a C on this Spit, Give it up kid an i Don't mean it in a Wrong Way so don't Get it Twisted like a Rain-Bow// I Spit so Much in All Different Directions might as well Call him my "Stained-Hoe", Let Go u Ain't gonna Win, Truly u Ain't number 1// 50 dat's your Number or Should i Say Number 101, Still u can't see this kid a fake,Like a Golden Tooth in a Mouth Placed// See as I Replace his Rhymes like Cavities waitin to be Filled-up With Feelings(Fillings)...Did i Hurt em Yet? --------------- Flow:shazz Structure:shazz Word Play:.:YouNg.MiC:. Metaphors:shazz Punches:shazz Personals:.:YouNg.MiC:. Creativity:.:YouNg.MiC:. Enjoyment:shazz Vote:shazz Explanation:YouNg.MiCs lines were played as hell...and long as, shazz had decent punchlines and got my vote.. no haten but you both need to elevate....werd can i get an RTF..they in my sig |
aight coo ill rtf honestly
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Voted For: Shazz
meh at this battle but shazz did type in 4 min young mic im guessin this iz ya first battle cuz ya shit was wack as hell (no d/r) dont put slashes like that all the time thats very newbish you oonly had one good punch and that was the stained hoe line anyway your lines were way overstretched, and your structure was wayyyy offf join a crew and get into elevation shazz gets this vote |
werd, yo im straight uppin on the RTF, and we uppin on votes with this battle.........................
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