Intermental - "Imprisoned" (Im Back!!)
 

compressed anger inside the mind of the confined,
blind to the oppurtunities that life provides,
imprisoned by the mental block he has built,]
an outer posture, shows confidence, but he contains inner guilt,
a tainted heart scarred by the prison bars,
that eradicate feelings as he writes poetry in the dark,
pours out anger and emotion, showerin the page with rage,
yearns for a new chance at life, education he wishes to obtain,
sees an arcade of colors, he wishes to play,
but light is shadowed as his darkness arrays,
military minded, confined, in the dreaded penitentiary,
he pleads and wishes to bury his guilty history,
controlled by the intrusive, obtrusive, guards who dont care atalll,
locked in hell, they patiently wait with guns for his fall,
strong built, and climb the impossible hills, a soldier reminicent,
the same three words play in his mind....."I am innocent"

aight this was good good emotion ould have used better vocab but its still nice good try id say 8/10 as you slipped up on the vocabn a bit but overall u stayed on point rite on the topic ......One.

aiyo thanks dawg

ii ii gud shyt nigga....das wassup the next generation is takin ova man holla atcha boi 1

i dont comment on flow n shit cos if u cant hear it u cant tell, cos it depends on the individuals flow style as to how it flows, but your emotion was pretty god, and vocab is better than other joints i read so props, some nice multies used aswell, this is a pretty good drop man, keep it up.... safe