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Clyde Dubz 09-09-05 10:38 AM

THE NAME vs Def.
 
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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 09-09-05 at 11:08 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 09-09-05 10:39 AM

THE NAME has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-05 10:39 AM.

System 09-09-05 10:40 AM

Def. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-05 10:40 AM.

Jay Royal 09-09-05 10:49 AM

fuck this dude,his bitch I kill him easy, hes hurting…aitz!*
ou sorry ur not dope, …………....I just got hurt my knee.
boy is copy kat wanna-be-me, get fuck off just forget it kid,
try to steal my dna, take my fingerprint “after I shit on it.”
boy told to give me “L” ,yea ur right man, that’s for “def”
but boy never finished his first grade, cant even alphabet.
that kat is free ticket in my way to elevated front lines,
like im run round the field
……………….and ur that fag on my way to home slide.
u don’t have to drop ur verse,ur om kills me,I laught my ass off!!**


*hes battling guy called aitz or something
**check his disstrack to me in open mics
just quick key style……….

Clyde Dubz 09-09-05 10:59 AM

The Name? all "mouth" action like teenage lip lockin
His verse coming up "short" like pelegic kick boxing
Confused vulgar using more M/F like he switchin his sex (M.utha F.uckas)
Tries to write a punch but finds himself drifitng like italic text
Verse prolly be "Shitty" lets wait an see what his "ass" holds
Cause lord knows his lines more "streched" than his asshole
The Next Big Thing? you should have seen this kids eyes
When he confused his IQ for his penis size
Him win this battle?heh i guess you could dream an assume
Witta girl in his sig last time he seens pussy was when popped out the womb

Jay Royal 09-09-05 11:27 AM

.yo nice mayne......uppin this.lets get some real votes.....

Clyde Dubz 09-10-05 01:15 AM

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Jay Royal 09-10-05 11:50 AM

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Jay Royal 09-11-05 11:42 AM

.................................................. uppin

Jay Royal 09-13-05 12:23 AM

............................................uppin. ..........................................

mizz fyre 09-13-05 10:02 AM

Voted For: Def.

the name: i wasn't feelin your verse at all to be honest.....it lacked in many areas....not enough punches to get you the win....and it also lacked in personals.....
def: your verse was nice, lots of punches...some hard hitting...tho i think you could improve your finisher
def gets my vote for harder-hitting punches and wordplay.....


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