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Daubs vs Hotshh!
Battle Rules:
Livin Legendz VS The Establishment 2 day check, 2 day drop, not checking in results in a loss. 10-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No E-Style Votes (due to possible merge.) No DR, just vote honestly. 600 posts to vote, Good Luck Minimum posts to vote: 600 Check in by: 09-12-05 at 04:10 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 08:20 AM.
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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 10:39 AM.
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Look kid
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets 22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts "Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"? (uk fucker)(avy WAS bush) |
Fuck DR, not your fault like but make sure you people vote HONESTLY..
Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner.. And its true you cause RV PanIc... ..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!! Switching it up... Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout.. And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!! Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity.. And he's is intouch with his inner child.. ..when he snatches kids from the city!! Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining.. And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!! hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal.. Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!! I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore.. Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof.. ..even when hes sat on the floor!! If needed: PanIc > Pan Ice hit the roof is an expression for angry, and the rest is simple wordplay. Vote honestly, will RTF |
This was feedback posted for hotshh!
Both my homies. But one is crew... So go hotty go!
Hahaha, good battle you two. TE fo life.. :shoot: |
safe man, no beef anyway whatever happens.
*Points magnum in SR's face* |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
pollz. fam..............................................
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!
checking this out....................................
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Voted For: hotshh!
Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner.. And its true you cause RV PanIc... ..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!! 5.....decent....didn't like 1st line though and how is panic=pan-ice?.. Switching it up... Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout.. And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!! 6...good Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity.. And he's is intouch with his inner child.. ..when he snatches kids from the city!! 3...this was weak..becuz..I mean..inner child?wtf? Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining.. And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!! 3...no...c'mon...esspecially that 1st line..and stop with the explamation points... hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal.. Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!! 5...decent..nothing spectacular..but decent I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore.. Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof.. ..even when hes sat on the floor!! 4...good concept with the whole hit the roof..but....sat on floor? I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets 6...good 22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets 6...good...but would have hit harder if it wasn't for the set-up..if he got a good rec..don't mention it LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts 3..played..i've heard this before "Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page 5...good Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake 6..hmm..good..but leaf lines are gettin played now... Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"? 8...best bar in this battle..multis were nice too.. Ok..hotshh! got this. Daubs..I thought you had some decent concepts,but ur wording was bad and so were ur set-ups.Such as the hit the roof line and the but of pistol.But then again..some lines were just based off bad concepts.Like..how is panic>pan-ice?Just like that..an E comes out of the word?And then...that snatchin kids line..now..ur concept was..touchin inner child?NO.A couple of multis in ur verse was abit forced too. Vote-Hotshh! Hit my battle up with 9th degree http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208431 Vote removed... Alias on Daub's blacklist |
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Lol, Daubs has Mimesis' structure style. :O
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!
This battle was fucking garbage.
:wtf: I'm really hoping you guys didn't try.. |
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Yep.. I am just a stud. |
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close battle, hotshh! edged it in my opinion.........LMAO @ that closer....:D :shoot:
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