Drama Queen vs Immense
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20-30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting TOPIC: The Black Box ((be creative)) :thumbup: werd Crew Battle: The Establishment vs. Livin' Legends G'Luck to both. :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 09-13-05 at 04:10 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. Closed - expired battle win |
Immense has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 02:02 PM.
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Drama Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 03:53 PM.
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The Black Box Awake yet unable to open my hollow, heavy eyes Blinded by a sunrise in this midst of cloudy skies Carefully touch around the grimy, unstable ground I seek yet nothing is found but a mere alien sound I seem to detect from inside this cold, moist cave Unaware whether to behave as a master or a slave Though I believe we've got to obey our Earth's laws Because we're only humans, with our foolish flaws Rolling, rumbling thunder in depth of the mountain Suddenly spitting crimson clusters: fiery fountain Arise from my position, in back of mind a mission To try and define the birth of a bass as a musician Parting with my current abode for a perfidious road Mountain proceeds to explode, a dim dark showed High threes casting shadows on own mortal being Rapidly move along that you would think I’m fleeing All scenarios start racing deep in this mind of mine Suddenly shivers down my spine as I view a shrine A gloomy room filled with scent of flowers in bloom Yet the walls are painted pitch-black: sign of doom I go further and there…! On the table lays a present But something tells me it might not be as pleasant I study the little package: it says ”the secret of life” May this be dagger of a knife or an end to all strife? Should I take this unique chance with both hands? And reveal God’s plans and maybe even demands My mind is torn apart though I obey the gift’s locks Who knows what shocks come with the black box? I was tempted to open as if it was fruit so forbidden Though I know it was right to keep mystery hidden |
Couples grasping for each other...so desperate to clutch... Last minute phone calls to loved ones..."kids we love you so much"... Tearful last good byes...a stone throw away from deaths bed... Fataly gasping a last breath...suddenly the phone becomes dead... Humanitys soulful trickster...as their right to life is forbidden... The flight recorders black box is were all the answers are hidden... Feelings of self-worth blackened out...past mistakes all forgiven... Frantic leaps for survival...safety demonstrations overridden... Hugs and kisses...turbulance hits as the emotions unravel... Air meals flying around like the flight was space travel... Suitcases sprung open...peoples possesions slung to the floor... Images like those of a war as the blood increasingly pours... Captain speaks over the microphone...pleeing for calmness... But passengers screams prove the situation is far from harmless... The air-craft starts to plumit...like gravity overpowers above it... Not even 395 frantic passengers prays can overcome it... Suddenly the lights go out...pitch black at 10,000 meters above ground... Screams stop...all noise blackened out...not even the tiniest of sounds... Souls lost...speech meaningless...all these mindz confound... The mysterys of the black box still is...and always will be unfound... |
This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
Polls and all that ish. Dope drop Drama Baby......
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
Checking this out like whoa..........................
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
pollz............................................. ....
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This was feedback posted for Immense
Nice both of you, good luck.......................
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
checkin .
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Why are topicals so slept on.....................?
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
pollz fam..............................................
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Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp.
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Fuckin' vote on this people so the crew battle can be closed.
Next person to check the polls is a fuckin' faggot. |
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