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King Solo 09-10-05 04:10 PM

Drama Queen vs Immense
 
Battle Rules:

20-30 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

TOPIC: The Black Box ((be creative)) :thumbup: werd

Crew Battle: The Establishment vs. Livin' Legends

G'Luck to both. :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 09-13-05 at 04:10 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Closed - expired battle win

System 09-12-05 02:02 PM

Immense has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 02:02 PM.

System 09-12-05 03:53 PM

Drama Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 03:53 PM.

DQ 09-14-05 10:49 AM

The Black Box


Awake yet unable to open my hollow, heavy eyes
Blinded by a sunrise in this midst of cloudy skies
Carefully touch around the grimy, unstable ground
I seek yet nothing is found but a mere alien sound
I seem to detect from inside this cold, moist cave
Unaware whether to behave as a master or a slave
Though I believe we've got to obey our Earth's laws
Because we're only humans, with our foolish flaws
Rolling, rumbling thunder in depth of the mountain
Suddenly spitting crimson clusters: fiery fountain
Arise from my position, in back of mind a mission
To try and define the birth of a bass as a musician
Parting with my current abode for a perfidious road
Mountain proceeds to explode, a dim dark showed
High threes casting shadows on own mortal being
Rapidly move along that you would think I’m fleeing
All scenarios start racing deep in this mind of mine
Suddenly shivers down my spine as I view a shrine
A gloomy room filled with scent of flowers in bloom
Yet the walls are painted pitch-black: sign of doom
I go further and there…! On the table lays a present
But something tells me it might not be as pleasant
I study the little package: it says ”the secret of life”
May this be dagger of a knife or an end to all strife?
Should I take this unique chance with both hands?
And reveal God’s plans and maybe even demands
My mind is torn apart though I obey the gift’s locks
Who knows what shocks come with the black box?
I was tempted to open as if it was fruit so forbidden
Though I know it was right to keep mystery hidden



Immense 09-14-05 12:09 PM

Couples grasping for each other...so desperate to clutch...
Last minute phone calls to loved ones..."kids we love you so much"...
Tearful last good byes...a stone throw away from deaths bed...
Fataly gasping a last breath...suddenly the phone becomes dead...
Humanitys soulful trickster...as their right to life is forbidden...
The flight recorders black box is were all the answers are hidden...
Feelings of self-worth blackened out...past mistakes all forgiven...
Frantic leaps for survival...safety demonstrations overridden...
Hugs and kisses...turbulance hits as the emotions unravel...
Air meals flying around like the flight was space travel...
Suitcases sprung open...peoples possesions slung to the floor...
Images like those of a war as the blood increasingly pours...
Captain speaks over the microphone...pleeing for calmness...
But passengers screams prove the situation is far from harmless...
The air-craft starts to plumit...like gravity overpowers above it...
Not even 395 frantic passengers prays can overcome it...
Suddenly the lights go out...pitch black at 10,000 meters above ground...
Screams stop...all noise blackened out...not even the tiniest of sounds...
Souls lost...speech meaningless...all these mindz confound...
The mysterys of the black box still is...and always will be unfound...

Adam 09-14-05 06:59 PM

This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 
Polls and all that ish. Dope drop Drama Baby......

Dervla 09-14-05 07:02 PM

This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 
Checking this out like whoa..........................

King Solo 09-14-05 10:06 PM

This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 
pollz............................................. ....

Daubs 09-17-05 06:29 AM

This was feedback posted for Immense
 
Nice both of you, good luck.......................

Artemis 09-17-05 08:06 AM

This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 
checkin .

Adam 09-17-05 11:09 PM

Why are topicals so slept on.....................?

Dickard. 09-17-05 11:30 PM

This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 
pollz fam..............................................

Adam 09-18-05 08:33 PM

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp.

Adam 09-19-05 09:08 AM

Fuckin' vote on this people so the crew battle can be closed.

Next person to check the polls is a fuckin' faggot.

Daubs 09-20-05 12:43 PM

up................................................ .


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