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A Message TRuth here...
Forrest was right lifes really like a box of choclates u search and search
And you lay down at night and pray to god that everything works Pray so hard that you wont mess up and slip that u'll getta grip on things Nobodys perfect so theres gonna be times u slip and trip on things God died on the cross for ya sins and most people can even be thankfull But hes a forgiving god but what were doing today is soo shamefull He trys too open our eyes with diasters like Katrina and 9/11 Hes makin us open our eyes too realize that he's waiting in heaven Is the end near? the sooner the better cuz i'll get too see his perfection So in life you gotta learn lessons so in the end u can seek his reflection My love for the lords strong i pray my names written in the book of life i'm gonna start tryin too live my life right for christ till the end of my fight just somthing key'd up bout god |
was feelin this piece a lot......... had a hard time catchin the flow, but that's probably cuz u just key'd it up......... okay structure and topic............. nice rhyme scheme........... overall an 8.5/10 ........... please return the favor.......... i got an OM called the Konchance of Hip-Hop that's gettin slept on. plz post some feed.......
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