condemned vs E-Clipse
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Biting
No Recycling
No d/r
No Crew Votes
No Hate
No Bullshit

3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO

get the battle over quicker...:thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-05 at 09:57 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

condemned has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-05 08:59 PM.

E-Clipse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-05 09:01 PM.

*full on multi verse for ya*

Dude ya like fat kids with armbands, ya still struggle to stay afloat..
Cuz yo, ya skillz cudn’t ‘eat away at a verse’ if they were spit by a goat..
This kids condemned to lose, I didn’t mean to rock ya boat..
And I ain’t talking ‘bout ya avy, but I’ll have u gone in a puff of smoke..
Fuckin joke! Give ya hometown advantage, I’ll hang ya up to choke..
Cuz yea, we in this kid’s ‘neck of the woods’, and I’m ‘pullin’ the rope’..
U can’t cope! But yo, I’ll give this bitch a treat cuz I’m kind to folk..
I heard he had a taste for ‘soul food’,
…………………………so I’ll shove my foot down his throat..

only iron mike's packin presses creases in his skirts
spit liquid acid that trangresses, heart beat ceases when it squirts
I'm pickin on cripples, the way I attack ya disability
(diss- ability)
with punches so fast ya be thinkin thats theres 10 of me
you really aint no friend to me, lets end this trash bout
treat ya like some 'fliers', when I'm done ya 'passed out'
Con'll infect ya train of thought to disrupt ya mental vision
then dice ya body into thirds, I'm a master with division

yea, uppin this battle............................

can we get some votes on this battle mayne..............

uppin for some votes..............come on now...........

This was feedback posted for E-Clipse
 

im afraid you both suck.

no offense.

Voted For: E-Clipse

iight..

both had gd punches but clipes' were more hard hitting...verse had a better flow and that was due to a gd structure (gd job)...wordplays were decent they were clare and quite entertainin..iight heres a lil break down...


Dude ya like fat kids with armbands, ya still struggle to stay afloat..
Cuz yo, ya skillz cudn’t ‘eat away at a verse’ if they were spit by a goat..


^^that was a nice opner had humor...7/10


U can’t cope! But yo, I’ll give this bitch a treat cuz I’m kind to folk..
I heard he had a taste for ‘soul food’,
…………………………so I’ll shove my foot down his throat..


^^closer was nice too cool wordplay...irony was decent gd gd..8/10



condemed...ya verse was ok but dont get mad whan i say i wasnt feelin somelines 4 example


I'm pickin on cripples, the way I attack ya disability
with punches so fast ya be thinkin thats theres 10 of me


...^^tht woulda been cool if only u ended the secondline well...didnt really really rhyme yo...5/10



only iron mike's packin presses creases in his skirts
spit liquid acid that trangresses, heart beat ceases when it squirts

^^...opner was ok but secondline was a lil too sttched...5/10

Con'll infect ya train of thought to disrupt ya mental vision
then dice ya body into thirds, I'm a master with division

^^...typin ur name in ur verse durin a battle makes it self-glo...but this was okcos u stuffed some gd vocab and it hit quite well...


overall both verses were gd but clipse gets this for being constant with the harder hittin punches and the humorized lines he dropped...


now i tookmy time to explain and honestly vote on this..plz do the same in one of mine thanx!!

yeah...like u cud do any better....ugh

uppin for some votes...............................

uppin for some votes yo...............................

Voted For: E-Clipse

only iron mike's packin presses creases in his skirts
spit liquid acid that trangresses, heart beat ceases when it squirts
^^^Ight opener
I'm pickin on cripples, the way I attack ya disability
(diss- ability)
with punches so fast ya be thinkin thats theres 10 of me
^^^No...opener was ight then it didnt hit
you really aint no friend to me, lets end this trash bout
treat ya like some 'fliers', when I'm done ya 'passed out'
^^^Weak
Con'll infect ya train of thought to disrupt ya mental vision
then dice ya body into thirds, I'm a master with division
^^^Nice closer

Dude ya like fat kids with armbands, ya still struggle to stay afloat..
Cuz yo, ya skillz cudn’t ‘eat away at a verse’ if they were spit by a goat..
^^^Nice opener
This kids condemned to lose, I didn’t mean to rock ya boat..
And I ain’t talking ‘bout ya avy, but I’ll have u gone in a puff of
smoke..
^^^ight personal nuthin to special
Fuckin joke! Give ya hometown advantage, I’ll hang ya up to choke..
Cuz yea, we in this kid’s ‘neck of the woods’, and I’m ‘pullin’ the rope’..
^^^Good punch
U can’t cope! But yo, I’ll give this bitch a treat cuz I’m kind to folk..
I heard he had a taste for ‘soul food’,
…………………………so I’ll shove my foot down his throat..
^^^Nice closer

V/E-clipse.....this was a onesided battle....con came wit weak punchs that were played some were ight an most were not...ur structure was good but u need to work on wordplay an personals...Clipse u came wit a solid verse wit consistent punchs an personals that hit effectively...V/E-Clipse.....R>T>F.............1

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This was feedback posted for E-Clipse
 

pollz n shit........................................