Monster vs Barz&Penstripes
 

Battle Rules:

15 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

The topic is: Bush's and FEMA playing playstation 2 while Hurricane Katrina ravage Mississippi leaving thousands dead, homeless and jobless



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-16-05 at 10:18 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Monster has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-05 10:22 PM.

Barz&Penstripes has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-05 10:37 PM.

so when u droppin?.......................................

while home at the white house sitting on the floor lights out
Playstation blasting secret serviceman cries out Mr. President
Sir newsflash, Katrina left a disaster sir we better move fast
Damn it, Get FEMA off their ass and let me finish my game!
Why everytime I play this shit somebody's calling my name!?
Did they vote for my campaign or do they agree with Kanye?
Mr. President they're living on rooftops, probably starving!
Well we gotta know..... we're talking bout resources
I'm not spending money on people thats not even suppoting
My cause my election my war my protection my direction....
The list goes on condoleeza fix my erection get my message
Thats a negro state ain't it, at least about 90 percent
Hope they don't scream Affirmative Action i don't give a shit
The boys are in Iraq protecting Oil Fields an important deal
So what! kids are using dead parents as rafts times are real
Now give me that Resident Evil let me start a new game
Here's the finger take a picture and paste on Newsday

sorry bout the wait I forgot I set the battle up! lol!

Peace

bout to drop.............................................. ....................

[CENTER]~Bush, Bush, Bush....with nuttin but buttons to push ~
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Oval office 8:00am, bush's got madden 06 on the box
Codilezzas in Iraq, and theres no countrys left to watch
they've all been politicaly botched, insanely ripped and-
sure the game is bitchin', but damn bush a hurricanes hittin'
and theres no one to listen, to these people in pain
your so decietful and vane, way to hateful to rane
US voting is lame, cuz flordia had a honest mishap
another gulf states fault, damn! how ironic is that
you spawned all this crap, and yet not even a care
just worried about pressin' the X, Triangle, O, and square
on the PS2, see he "MR. Bush" said we fucked you
and FEMA too, thats "Mr Brown" so we can trust who?
the superdomes flooded, and bourbon streets in shambles
murders on the up, so was it worth the big gamble
to build a city below sea level, just ask yourself that
now its covered in water, cause the leves lay flat
how could this be, after everyone said this would happen
couldnt spend a little more, now you sittin back laughin'
the day of reckoning is coming, so watch over your shoulder
cuz the rumble you'll feal, wont be no affect on a controler
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~Monster~[CENTER]

Uppin for votes! Will RTF! Vote honestly and only thorough critiques!

Voted For: Barz&Penstripes

Poooolllllllzzzzzz................................ ..........

This was feedback posted for Monster
 

pollz.............................................

Voted For: Monster

v/monster

montster-your verse was pretty subpar man, ur vocab was pretty simple really nothing above average...u need to expand your vocab to be a good topical battler....ur structure wasnt such a problem...some lines stretched but flowed pretty good....your creativity was pretty good, but ur topic was not too original...pretty weird at that..but u stayed on topic and was good....6/10 overall

barzpenstripes-Your verse was not too good, i feel that your vocab was ok...i liked how you tried to expand your vocab..but it wasnt working for your verse. your structure was hard to follow..ur lines didnt even rhyme....ur creativity was subpar...ur verse just overall just lacked skill......this was a weak topical battle...no hate to either 3/10

v/monster

rtf in 48 hours or this vote is dq'd

This was feedback posted for Barz&Penstripes
 

just checkin' my boyz stats out.... werd... y'all kats is wildin with that topic...lmao